金钱— Part 1 评分报告
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Part 1
考官
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
考生
No, I haven't ever borrowed money from others because usually I have enough money to buy some things or if I don't have enough I usually ask my parents to give it little for me. Sometimes that's it. I have many lucky money so I never borrow money from others.
考官
Have you ever lent money to others?
考生
No, I haven't ever lent money to others because most of my friend are using credit card or online paying when buying things whatever. I usually pay by cash, so I don't often carry many money to lend. Also I sometimes worry that I might not get able to get.
评估
总分
Part 1
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
分数: 65.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó dùng các từ nối để làm rõ và mở rộng ý một cách tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác như "give it little for me" và "I have many lucky money" để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.
示例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I usually have enough savings. If I need extra money, I ask my parents for a small loan. Therefore, I rarely find myself in a situation where I need to borrow from friends.
Have you ever lent money to others?
分数: 60.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý, đồng thời tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh như "I might not get able to get". Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản nhưng chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
示例: No, I have never lent money to others because most of my friends use credit cards or online payments. I usually pay with cash and don't carry much money, so I rarely have the chance to lend. Also, I worry that I might not get the money back.
语法
× I have many lucky money so I never borrow money from others.
✓ I have a lot of lucky money so I never borrow money from others.
The phrase 'many lucky money' is incorrect because 'money' is an uncountable noun and cannot be used with 'many'. Instead, use 'a lot of' to quantify uncountable nouns like 'money'.
× most of my friend are using credit card or online paying when buying things whatever.
✓ most of my friends are using credit cards or paying online when buying things.
The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'most of'. Also, 'credit card' should be plural 'credit cards' to match the plural subject. The phrase 'online paying' is incorrect; it should be 'paying online'. The word 'whatever' is unnecessary and informal here.
× I usually pay by cash, so I don't often carry many money to lend.
✓ I usually pay by cash, so I don't often carry much money to lend.
'Money' is an uncountable noun and should be quantified with 'much' instead of 'many'. 'Many' is used with countable nouns.
× Also I sometimes worry that I might not get able to get.
✓ Also, I sometimes worry that I might not be able to get it back.
The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The phrase 'might not get able to get' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'might not be able to get it back' to express concern about repayment.
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