金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and fluency. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for better understanding. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details. Also, be careful with grammar and vocabulary to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money a few times. For example, once I needed to pay a fee for an exam form, but I didn't have enough money at that moment. So, I asked a close friend to lend me 100 rupees, and he kindly gave it without asking when I would return it.

建议: Your response is on topic but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid filler words and try to structure your sentences properly. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific examples with clear explanations. This will make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: Yes, I have lent money a few times to help friends who were facing financial difficulties. For instance, I once lent money to a classmate who needed to buy study materials, and helping him gave me a great sense of satisfaction.

× I have to do a form fill up for exam and I don't have money at that time.

✓ I had to fill up a form for the exam and I didn't have money at that time.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the present tense 'have' and 'don't' should be changed to past tense 'had' and 'didn't' to maintain tense consistency.

× I approach one of my close friend, I weigh him to give 100 he gave me without asking uh, for time to when I have to return that.

✓ I approached one of my close friends, I asked him to give me 100; he gave it to me without asking for the time when I had to return it.

The verb 'approach' should be in past tense 'approached' to match the past context. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' as 'one of my close friends' is the correct phrase. 'Weigh' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'asked'. Also, prepositions and sentence structure were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Once remember I given final visual my classmate who is looking to buy study material and that gave me inner present and happiness.

✓ Once I remember, I gave financial help to my classmate who was looking to buy study material, and that gave me inner peace and happiness.

The verb 'given' is incorrect here; it should be 'gave' to indicate past tense. 'Final visual' is unclear and corrected to 'financial help' for meaning. 'Is looking' changed to 'was looking' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Inner present' corrected to 'inner peace' for correct expression.