金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免重复和错误的表达，并且使用简单正确的句子。

示例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I usually manage my expenses carefully.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并具体说明借钱的原因和情况。

示例: Yes, I sometimes lend money to my friends or my mom when they need to buy something important, usually around $100.

× I don't think I need to borrow money from me because I am not adult.

✓ I don't think I need to borrow money from others because I am not an adult.

句中“borrow money from me”中的“me”用错了，应该是“others”，表示从别人那里借钱。另外，“not adult”缺少冠词，应为“not an adult”。

× I am not 12 years old student.

✓ I am not a 12-year-old student.

“12 years old student”中缺少冠词“a”，且“12 years old”应改为形容词短语“12-year-old”修饰“student”。

× Sometimes I always send money to my friend or to my mom because they use it to buy some stuff so I will give maybe $100.

✓ I sometimes send money to my friend or my mom because they use it to buy some stuff, so I might give maybe $100.

“Sometimes”与“always”同时使用语义冲突，应去掉“always”。“Sometimes”应放在句首或动词前。句中“so I will give maybe $100”时态和语气不太合适，改为“might give maybe $100”更自然。