金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap açık ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık hataları var. Cümleniz düzensiz ve tekrara sahip. Önce doğrudan soruya yanıt verin (ör. "No, I usually don't."), sonra kısa bir neden cümlesi ekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri daha akıcı hâle getirin ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın. Örneğin: "I don't usually borrow money because I save carefully and budget my salary, so I rarely need to ask others for help." Ayrıca 'prefer borrow' yerine 'prefer to borrow' ve 'I needn't borrow someone' yerine 'I don't need to borrow from anyone' gibi doğru yapıları kullanın.

示例: No, I usually don't borrow money. I save carefully and plan my monthly budget, so I rarely need to ask anyone for financial help.

建议: Cevapta zaman kullanımı, kelime sıralaması ve tutarlılık sorunları var. Önce kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi söyleyin (ör. "Yes, I have lent money before."). Ardından geçmiş zamanı doğru kullanarak deneyimi açıklayın ve neden hissettiğinizi belirtin. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri düzenleyin ve gereksiz tekrarı çıkarın. Örneğin: "When I was a child, I lent a small amount to my sister and felt shy because it was my first time lending money." Ayrıca 'When I was child' → 'When I was a child', 'I lend' → 'I lent' ve 'my sisters' → 'my sister' gibi düzeltmeler yapın.

示例: Yes, I have. When I was a child I lent a small amount of money to my sister, and I felt shy because it was the first time I had ever lent money to someone.

× I don't prefer borrow money from others because I am good at saving money and I do plan for my salary and I needn't borrow some someone.

✓ I don't prefer borrowing money from others because I am good at saving money, I plan for my salary, and I don't need to borrow from anyone.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'borrowing' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Do plan' is acceptable for emphasis but unnecessary; better is 'I plan'. 'Needn't' is uncommon in modern spoken English and 'borrow some someone' is ungrammatical; use 'don't need to borrow from anyone'. Also adjust word order and articles for clarity. Suggestions: use 'prefer + -ing', use 'don't need to' for negative necessity, and replace 'someone' with 'anyone'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× When I was child, I lend money my sisters it's a it was a small amount of money but I felt shy because it was the first time I have borrowed the money.

✓ When I was a child, I lent my sisters some money; it was a small amount, but I felt shy because it was the first time I had borrowed money.

Multiple tense and article errors: 'When I was child' needs the article 'a child' (Grammar Problem Type 22 Article errors). 'Lend' should be past tense 'lent' to match 'When I was a child' (Grammar Problem Type 5 Past tense issue). The clause 'it was the first time I have borrowed the money' should use past perfect 'I had borrowed money' because this borrowing happened before the feeling of shyness (Grammar Problem Type 9 Verb in the past participle form / past perfect usage). Also remove redundant 'the' before 'money' and fix word order. Suggestions: use 'a child', use 'lent' for past events, and use past perfect 'had borrowed' to indicate an earlier action.