应用程序— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且明确说明应用的名称和功能。

示例: Recently, I have used a meditation app that helps me relax. I also use a dance app called 'YouDance' which improves my English by teaching me dance-related vocabulary.

建议: 回答不完整且重复，缺少具体例子。建议直接回答问题，补充具体的社交应用名称，使用连词使句子更流畅。

示例: I am usually interested in social apps like Instagram because its interface is tidy and clean. Moreover, I can easily search for different content, which makes me feel happy.

建议: 表达不准确，词汇使用错误。建议使用正确的词汇表达，如通过朋友推荐或手机广告发现应用，并且句子结构要完整。

示例: I usually find new apps through my friends' recommendations or advertisements on my phone.

建议: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达想要的应用功能，并使用恰当的词汇。

示例: In the future, I would like to use apps that can monitor my health condition and help me create a list of healthy teas to drink.

× I recently used an apps called it makes me feel relaxed and I can do some I can scrolling some shopping ideas.

✓ I recently used an app called it makes me feel relaxed and I can do some scrolling for shopping ideas.

“apps”是复数形式，但前面用了不定冠词“an”，应使用单数“app”。

× I recently used an apps called it makes me feel relaxed and I can do some I can scrolling some shopping ideas.

✓ I recently used an app called it makes me feel relaxed and I can do some scrolling for shopping ideas.

动词“scrolling”应作为动名词使用，表示正在进行的动作，且前面应加介词“for”表示目的。

× I use a ube dance apps, it's improve my English language.

✓ I use a ube dance app, it improves my English language.

“apps”应为单数“app”，因为前面有不定冠词“a”。

× I use a ube dance apps, it's improve my English language.

✓ I use a ube dance app, it improves my English language.

第三人称单数主语“it”后动词应加-s，变为“improves”。

× I usually interested in social apps such as.

✓ I am usually interested in social apps such as.

“interested”是形容词，前面需要助动词“am”构成现在时态的被动结构。

× Its interface is tidy and clean and I can find I can find I can search a kind of sources in it.

✓ Its interface is tidy and clean and I can find or search kinds of sources in it.

“a kind of sources”搭配错误，应为“kinds of sources”或“a kind of source”。

× I find out different taps through my a friend's accommodation or the advertisement in the mobile phone.

✓ I find out different apps through my friend's recommendation or advertisements on the mobile phone.

“taps”应为“apps”，且“a friend's accommodation”不合适，应为“friend's recommendation”。

× I find out different taps through my a friend's accommodation or the advertisement in the mobile phone.

✓ I find out different apps through my friend's recommendation or advertisements on the mobile phone.

“in the mobile phone”应改为“on the mobile phone”，表示在手机上。

× I like the apps can monitor my health condition and make a list for my healthy tea.

✓ I like apps that can monitor my health condition and make a list for my healthy tea.

缺少关系代词“that”引导定语从句，且“the apps”改为泛指“apps”。