应用程序— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'go doc' không rõ nghĩa và 'daily love' có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc dùng từ sai. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: I often use social media apps like Facebook, Instagram, and Zalo every day. I also watch videos on YouTube to learn new things. These apps are very useful and help me stay connected with others.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng chưa chính xác như 'directed some food delivery' và 'deduct them to many app'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually use makeup apps, social media apps, study apps, and music apps. I also use food delivery apps like Grab because I order food quite often. To save space on my phone, I try to limit the number of apps I install.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và khó hiểu, thiếu cấu trúc câu và từ vựng phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ cách bạn tìm hiểu về các ứng dụng mới.

示例: I usually find out about new apps through recommendations from friends or by reading reviews online. I also take notes on my phone to remember which apps I want to try.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên chuẩn bị câu trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đúng để thể hiện ý tưởng một cách hiệu quả.

示例: In the future, I would like to use social media apps that help me connect quickly with people around the world, such as TikTok or other networking platforms.

× I still use social media app like Facebook, Instagram, zalo everyday.

✓ I still use social media apps like Facebook, Instagram, Zalo every day.

The word 'app' should be plural 'apps' because it refers to multiple applications. Also, 'everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal, but here the adverbial phrase 'every day' (two words) is correct to indicate frequency.

× I also use YouTube to watch video and go doc for study.

✓ I also use YouTube to watch videos and go to the doctor for study.

'Video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple items. 'Go doc' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the doctor' or 'go to a doctor'. The preposition 'to' is necessary before 'doctor'.

× The app are really useful and I can imagine my daily love with the others.

✓ The apps are really useful and I can imagine my daily life with others.

'App' should be plural 'apps' to agree with 'are'. 'Love' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'life'. 'The others' is unnecessary; 'others' is sufficient.

× I have a makeup app, social media studying app or a music app.

✓ I have a makeup app, a social media studying app, or a music app.

Each singular noun phrase should have an article 'a' before it for clarity and correctness.

× I also directed some food delivery.

✓ I also order some food delivery.

'Directed' is the past tense of 'direct' and is incorrect here. The intended meaning is present habitual action, so 'order' is appropriate.

× I like grab some food because I order quite often.

✓ I like to grab some food because I order quite often.

After 'like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to grab' or gerund 'grabbing'. Here, 'to grab' fits better.

× I try to deduct them to many app to save space.

✓ I try to reduce them to many apps to save space.

'Deduct' is incorrect in this context; 'reduce' is appropriate. 'App' should be plural 'apps'.

× Umm, I think I will remember to hear his uh, but I don't forget.

✓ Umm, I think I will remember to hear it, but I don't forget.

The phrase is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Remember to hear his uh' is incorrect; 'remember to hear it' is clearer. Also, 'but I don't forget' is contradictory with 'will remember'; better phrasing is needed.

× I will take note in my phone, on my phone and always remind.

✓ I will take notes on my phone and always set reminders.

The correct preposition is 'on' for 'take notes on my phone'. 'Take note' should be plural 'take notes'. 'Always remind' is incomplete; 'set reminders' is clearer.

× Yes, I don't remember exactly I I think I give you in the future like social media to network quick though in the world interline exam or Tiktok.

✓ Yes, I don't remember exactly, but I think I will use social media in the future to network quickly around the world, like Instagram or TikTok.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Give you' is incorrect; 'will use' fits better. 'Network quick though in the world interline exam' is unclear; corrected to 'network quickly around the world'. 'Interline exam' is likely a mishearing of 'Instagram'.