应用程序— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to improve clarity.

示例: Recently, I have frequently used the IDP app on my iOS device. It helps me practice reading and writing skills by providing rules and instructions. Moreover, it offers in-depth information about the exam, which is very useful for my preparation.

建议: Your response is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid vague phrases.

示例: I am usually interested in educational apps, especially those that offer puzzles or games. For instance, I enjoy apps that challenge my mind and help me learn new things while having fun.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Begin with a direct answer, then explain with clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid ambiguous expressions and improve sentence structure.

示例: I usually find out about new apps through advertisements. However, sometimes algorithms affect my search history, so I prefer to explore websites myself. If I find an app interesting, I research it further before downloading.

建议: Your response is unclear and lacks a direct answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details with linking words. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas effectively.

示例: In the future, I would like to use apps that are easy to use and help improve business skills among young people. I believe such apps can support the younger generation in achieving higher standards in their careers.

× What the apps that I have recently used frequently was the IDP app where I was practicing on for iOS on how to read speech writing.

✓ The app that I have recently used frequently was the IDP app where I was practicing on for iOS on how to read speech writing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'apps' (plural) with 'was' (singular verb) and refers to a single app later. The subject and verb must agree in number. Changing 'apps' to 'app' matches the singular verb 'was'.

× I used that app to for to read the rules and instructions and also to understand in depth about the exam.

✓ I used that app to read the rules and instructions and also to understand in depth about the exam.

The phrase 'to for to read' is incorrect due to redundant prepositions. The correct form is 'to read'. Removing 'for to' corrects the prepositional error.

× There are so many options for apps, but one particular thing I'm interested in are the educational ads and even if it is a game, an Apple game, I would like something where I was due the opportunity to learn more days.

✓ There are so many options for apps, but one particular thing I'm interested in is the educational apps and even if it is a game, an Apple game, I would like something where I have the opportunity to learn more days.

The subject 'one particular thing' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'ads' should be 'apps' to fit context. 'I was due the opportunity' is incorrect; it should be 'I have the opportunity'.

× I found out about different apps, mostly to advertisements and one thing that I have also understood along the years is that when my search histories are being affected by the algorithm, it gives me fits and I need to explore the websites and if it's something that I acknowledge to me, I explore more into it.

✓ I found out about different apps mostly through advertisements and one thing that I have also understood over the years is that when my search histories are affected by the algorithm, it gives me fits and I need to explore the websites and if it's something that I acknowledge, I explore more into it.

The preposition 'to' after 'mostly' is incorrect; 'through' is appropriate. 'Along the years' should be 'over the years'. 'Acknowledge to me' is incorrect; 'acknowledge' does not take 'to me'.

× How much opinions about this yet that definitely considering the trends of apps that I'm using.

✓ I don't have much opinion about this yet, but I am definitely considering the trends of apps that I'm using.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'How much opinions' is incorrect; 'I don't have much opinion' is correct. The sentence needs a subject and verb to be complete.

× Something that is easy though and hopefully something that will uplift this business standards of the younger generations.

✓ Something that is easy though and hopefully something that will uplift the business standards of the younger generations.

'This business standards' is incorrect; 'this' should be 'the' to correctly refer to the noun 'business standards'.

× That is something that I would use to continue with the future.

✓ That is something that I would use to continue in the future.

The phrase 'continue with the future' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to time periods like 'the future'.