应用程序— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp lại cấu trúc câu. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm phong phú nội dung.

示例: I have recently been using Instagram quite often because it helps me stay connected with my friends. Moreover, it provides a great source of entertainment through photos and videos. For instance, I particularly enjoy following travel bloggers, which allows me to learn about new places around the world.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'not taking apps' nên là 'note-taking apps' và 'daily task' nên là 'daily tasks'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tăng điểm số.

示例: I'm usually interested in productivity apps, especially note-taking apps like Notes. These apps are very useful because they help me stay organized and focus on my daily tasks. For example, I can quickly jot down important ideas or reminders, which makes my day more efficient.

建议: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như câu cuối cùng 'And I can.' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý hoàn thiện câu và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually discover new apps through advertisements I come across while scrolling on TikTok. If I find an app that seems useful, such as one that helps me manage my daily tasks more efficiently, I decide to download it and incorporate it into my everyday routine.

建议: Bạn trả lời tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thì tương lai chính xác hơn ('as technology advances') và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về loại app bạn muốn sử dụng.

示例: In the future, I would like to use an English speaking app because I'm not very confident with my speaking skills. Such an app could help me practice pronunciation and improve my fluency. Moreover, as technology advances, I believe there will be more interactive apps that make learning to speak easier and more enjoyable.

× I'm easily interested in productivity apps, especially not taking apps like Notes.

✓ I'm easily interested in productivity apps, especially note-taking apps like Notes.

The phrase 'not taking apps' is incorrect; it should be 'note-taking apps' to correctly describe apps used for taking notes. This is a singular and plural issue because 'note-taking' is a compound adjective describing the plural noun 'apps'.

× The apps are very useful because they help me stay organized and focus on my daily task.

✓ The apps are very useful because they help me stay organized and focus on my daily tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple daily activities. Using the singular form here is incorrect when referring to more than one task.

× I usually discover new apps through advertisement I come across while scrolling on Tiktok.

✓ I usually discover new apps through advertisements I come across while scrolling on TikTok.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because it refers to multiple ads. Also, 'TikTok' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'scrolling on TikTok'.

× If I find an app that seems useful, or for example, one that helps me manage my daily task more efficiently, I decide to download it and incorporate it into my everyday routine.

✓ If I find an app that seems useful, for example, one that helps me manage my daily tasks more efficiently, I decide to download it and incorporate it into my everyday routine.

The phrase 'daily task' should be plural 'daily tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, the phrase 'or for example' is redundant; 'for example' alone is sufficient.

× I believe that as technology advanced, there will be more interactive apps that make learning speaking easier and more enjoyable.

✓ I believe that as technology advances, there will be more interactive apps that make learning speaking easier and more enjoyable.

The verb 'advanced' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a future or ongoing situation. The present tense 'advances' is appropriate here to indicate ongoing technological progress.