应用程序— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
What apps have you recently used?
考生
I have recently used WhatsApp to send photos to my mom, uh and The Sims for game for fun. And I recently used an English app to improve my English.
考官
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
考生
I usually interested in social media because I can easily keep in touch with my friends and my family. I can send them photos, messages, videos and cat videos online. It's easy to communicate.
考官
How do you find out different apps?
考生
I find out different apps via social media. People introduce their apps or someone else's apps. Then I would download it if it's a really good app or I would find out different apps from Play Store. I would just scroll and look what is good.
考官
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
考生
I would like to use social media in the future to keep in touch with my family and my friends, and I would like to use decoration apps because making decoration makes me feel safe, and I would like to use vocabularies to improve my English.
评估
总分
Part 1
What apps have you recently used?
分数: 75.0建议: Cevabınız doğal ancak daha akıcı ve etkili olması için gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha net ve kısa tutarak, her uygulamanın kullanım amacını daha spesifik şekilde açıklayabilirsiniz.
示例: Recently, I used WhatsApp to send photos to my mom, The Sims for entertainment, and an English learning app to improve my language skills.
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
分数: 80.0建议: Cümlenizde 'I usually interested' ifadesi dilbilgisi açısından hatalıdır, 'I am usually interested' olmalıdır. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayabilirsiniz.
示例: I am usually interested in social media apps because they allow me to easily keep in touch with my friends and family by sending photos, messages, and videos, including funny cat videos.
How do you find out different apps?
分数: 70.0建议: Cevabınızda bazı tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. 'I find out' yerine 'I discover' veya 'I learn about' kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirmelisiniz.
示例: I usually discover new apps through social media, where people recommend them. If an app seems useful, I download it. Otherwise, I browse the Play Store to find interesting apps.
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
分数: 75.0建议: Cümleniz biraz uzun ve bağlaç kullanımı daha etkili olabilir. Ayrıca, 'use vocabularies' ifadesi yanlış; 'use vocabulary apps' veya 'use apps to improve my vocabulary' daha doğru olur. Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapmaya çalışın.
示例: In the future, I would like to use social media apps to stay connected with my family and friends. Also, I want to try decoration apps because decorating makes me feel safe. Additionally, I plan to use vocabulary apps to improve my English.
语法
× I usually interested in social media because I can easily keep in touch with my friends and my family.
✓ I am usually interested in social media because I can easily keep in touch with my friends and my family.
The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'Usually interested' requires 'am' to be grammatically correct as 'I am usually interested'. This is a present tense issue.
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