应用程序— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and clarity. Try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Also, add linking words and specific details to enrich your response.

示例: Recently, I have been using an app designed to help with English exam preparation because I am studying for an upcoming test. It offers practice exercises and vocabulary building, which I find very helpful.

建议: Your answer is too short and somewhat unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammar and use more natural expressions.

示例: I am usually interested in educational and language learning apps because I am currently preparing for an exam. These apps help me improve my skills through interactive lessons and quizzes.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Use a clear structure with linking words to explain how you discover apps. Be specific and concise.

示例: I usually find new apps through recommendations. For example, I read comments related to my interests and sometimes my friends suggest apps that they think would suit me well.

建议: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your idea with specific details using linking words.

示例: In the future, I would like to use AI apps that can create personalized schedules for me. These apps would help manage my time efficiently by adapting to my daily routine.

× Recently, I used the app involved the English exam because I prepare myself for the English exam.

✓ Recently, I used the app involved in the English exam because I was preparing myself for the English exam.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Used' is past tense, so 'prepare' should be in past continuous 'was preparing' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'involved' should be 'involved in' to be grammatically correct.

× Recently, I used the app involved the English exam because I prepare myself for the English exam.

✓ Recently, I used the app involved in the English exam because I was preparing myself for the English exam.

The verb 'involved' requires the preposition 'in' to correctly link to 'the English exam'. Without 'in', the phrase is incorrect.

× As a education and language app, because right now I'm preparing myself for the exam so I use it a lot.

✓ As an education and language app, because right now I'm preparing myself for the exam, so I use it a lot.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'education'. Also, the sentence is a fragment and could be improved by adding a subject or restructuring, but per instructions, only grammar issues from the list are corrected.

× As a education and language app, because right now I'm preparing myself for the exam so I use it a lot.

✓ It is an education and language app because right now I'm preparing myself for the exam, so I use it a lot.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a main verb and subject. Adding 'It is' corrects the sentence structure.

× Actually is is like comment on the app that relate your interest so I knew it from the recommendations and sometimes my friends recommend the app that they think is suit me well.

✓ Actually, it is like comments on the app that relate to your interests, so I knew about it from recommendations, and sometimes my friends recommend apps that they think suit me well.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing subject 'it', repeated 'is', missing preposition 'to' after 'relate', incorrect plural 'comment' should be 'comments', and awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Actually is is like comment on the app that relate your interest so I knew it from the recommendations and sometimes my friends recommend the app that they think is suit me well.

✓ Actually, it is like comments on the app that relate to your interests, so I knew about it from recommendations, and sometimes my friends recommend apps that they think suit me well.

The verb 'relate' requires the preposition 'to' when connecting to 'your interests'. Also, 'knew it from the recommendations' is better as 'knew about it from recommendations'.

× Actually is is like comment on the app that relate your interest so I knew it from the recommendations and sometimes my friends recommend the app that they think is suit me well.

✓ Actually, it is like comments on the app that relate to your interests, so I knew about it from recommendations, and sometimes my friends recommend apps that they think suit me well.

The word 'comment' should be plural 'comments' to match the context. Also, 'app' should be plural 'apps' when referring generally.

× Actually is is like comment on the app that relate your interest so I knew it from the recommendations and sometimes my friends recommend the app that they think is suit me well.

✓ Actually, it is like comments on the app that relate to your interests, so I knew about it from recommendations, and sometimes my friends recommend apps that they think suit me well.

The phrase 'is suit me well' is incorrect; 'suit' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'is'. The correct form is 'that they think suit me well'.

× Actually is is like comment on the app that relate your interest so I knew it from the recommendations and sometimes my friends recommend the app that they think is suit me well.

✓ Actually, it is like comments on the app that relate to your interests, so I knew about it from recommendations, and sometimes my friends recommend apps that they think suit me well.

The pronoun 'it' is used ambiguously. Clarifying with 'about it' and pluralizing 'apps' improves pronoun reference and clarity.

× I like to use the AI app that mean like an they can create something for you personally like in your schedule that suit your time.

✓ I like to use AI apps that mean they can create something for you personally, like in your schedule that suits your time.

The sentence has unclear pronoun use: 'an they' is incorrect and should be removed. Also, 'app' should be plural 'apps' to match general meaning. 'Suit' should be 'suits' to agree with singular 'schedule'.

× I like to use the AI app that mean like an they can create something for you personally like in your schedule that suit your time.

✓ I like to use AI apps that mean they can create something for you personally, like in your schedule that suits your time.

'App' should be plural 'apps' because the sentence refers to AI apps in general. Also, 'mean' should be 'means' if singular, but here plural 'apps' requires 'mean'.

× I like to use the AI app that mean like an they can create something for you personally like in your schedule that suit your time.

✓ I like to use AI apps that mean they can create something for you personally, like in your schedule that suits your time.

The verb 'mean' should agree with the plural subject 'apps'. Also, 'suit' should be 'suits' to agree with singular 'schedule'.