应用程序— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and coherent by using plural forms correctly and linking ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

示例: I have recently used several apps, including Instagram, Facebook, ChatGPT, and Gemini. I mainly use social media apps to share reels and chat with friends. Additionally, I use AI apps like ChatGPT to get information; for instance, yesterday I followed a cake recipe with its help.

建议: Try to use plural forms correctly and add linking words to connect your ideas more naturally. Also, expand your answer slightly to provide more specific details.

示例: I am usually interested in AI-related and social media apps because AI apps can enhance people's skills. For example, I am currently learning how to create a website using ChatGPT, which has been very helpful.

建议: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and plural nouns. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide clearer examples.

示例: I usually find out about different apps through Instagram, which provides me with reels about various apps. Then, I download these apps from the Play Store. Sometimes, my friends also recommend useful apps; for example, last week a friend suggested I download a project management app.

建议: Focus on correct grammar, especially verb forms and articles. Make your answer more concise and coherent by linking ideas logically and avoiding repetition.

示例: In the future, I would like to use an app like Epic that helps people cook. Since I enjoy cooking but don't know how to prepare Indian cuisine well, I would definitely try an app that teaches me how to cook Indian dishes.

× I use social media app for sending reels and sometimes texting with friend.

✓ I use social media apps for sending reels and sometimes texting with friends.

The nouns 'app' and 'friend' should be plural because the context implies multiple apps and friends. Using singular forms here is incorrect.

× I'm interested in AI related app and social media app.

✓ I'm interested in AI-related apps and social media apps.

Both 'app' should be plural to match the context of interest in multiple types of apps. Also, 'AI related' should be hyphenated as 'AI-related' when used as an adjective.

× I use Instagram which provide me reels about different apps.

✓ I use Instagram which provides me with reels about different apps.

The verb 'provide' needs to agree with the singular subject 'Instagram' (provides). Also, the correct preposition after 'provide' in this context is 'with'.

× I then download this app from Play stores and sometime my friend also recommend me useful apps.

✓ I then download these apps from Play Store and sometimes my friend also recommends me useful apps.

'This app' should be 'these apps' to match plural context. 'Play stores' should be 'Play Store' as it is a proper noun. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'Recommend' should be 'recommends' to agree with singular subject 'friend'.

× For instance last week my friend asked me to download a project making app.

✓ For instance, last week my friend asked me to download a project-making app.

A comma is needed after 'For instance' for clarity. 'Project making' should be hyphenated as 'project-making' when used as a compound adjective.

× I would definitely like to use Epic helps peoples to cook.

✓ I would definitely like to use Epic, which helps people to cook.

The original sentence lacks a relative pronoun and has incorrect verb form and plural noun. 'Helps' should be linked with 'which' to form a relative clause. 'Peoples' is incorrect; the correct plural is 'people'.

× I definitely try a app which help me to cook Indian cuisine in future.

✓ I will definitely try an app which helps me to cook Indian cuisine in the future.

'A app' should be 'an app' because 'app' starts with a vowel sound. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'app'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' for correct expression.