聚会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言有些不自然，且存在语法错误，如“makes me very ignored”应改为“makes me feel ignored”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

示例: No, I don't really enjoy parties because I prefer quiet environments and spending time alone. The noisy atmosphere often makes me feel overlooked.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误，如“make made”应为“made”。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，同时可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: When I was a child, my parents occasionally held parties, mainly for birthdays and New Year's. We often celebrated with our neighbors or close relatives, which made the atmosphere very enjoyable.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“have never organize”应为“have never organized”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和句子连贯性，避免口语化的表达。

示例: No, I have never organized a party before. However, I often help my friends prepare for their parties by buying candies and other supplies, so I consider myself a good helper.

× And the noisy atmosphere makes me very ignored.

✓ And the noisy atmosphere makes me feel very ignored.

这里缺少动词feel，导致句子结构不完整。'ignored'是形容词，前面需要有动词来连接，表示感受。应加上feel，表示“让我感到被忽视”。

× We often celebrated with our neighbors or close relatives, which make made the atmosphere very enjoyable.

✓ We often celebrated with our neighbors or close relatives, which made the atmosphere very enjoyable.

句中出现了重复的动词形式'make made'，应删除多余的'make'，只保留过去式'made'，与句子时态保持一致。

× No, I have never organize a party before.

✓ No, I have never organized a party before.

现在完成时中，动词应使用过去分词形式。'organize'的过去分词是'organized'，因此应改为'have never organized'。