交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'crosswords' instead of 'crosswalks' and incomplete sentences. To improve, try to form complete sentences with clear meaning and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'Yes, there are many crosswalks in my neighborhood, which help people, especially those going to work, to cross the roads safely.'

示例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my neighborhood, which help people, especially those going to work, to cross the roads safely.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'bumpers' and 'strawbs'. To improve, use correct vocabulary and complete sentences. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say, 'Yes, if I had the chance, I would install speed bumps to slow down vehicles because speeding is dangerous, especially for children playing nearby.'

示例: Yes, if I had the chance, I would install speed bumps to slow down vehicles because speeding is dangerous, especially for children playing nearby.

× Yes, in my neighborhood there are a lot of crosswords.

✓ Yes, in my neighborhood there are a lot of crosswalks.

The word 'crosswords' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'crosswalks' which refers to pedestrian crossings. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects clarity and correctness.

× Becaused. People who are working can go easily. Without any danger.

✓ Because people who are working can go easily without any danger.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Becaused' is not a word; it should be 'Because'. The sentence should be combined into one coherent sentence to convey the meaning properly.

× if I would get a chance to change the traffic in my area then.

✓ if I got a chance to change the traffic in my area, then

The phrase 'if I would get' is incorrect in conditional sentences. The correct form is 'if I got' for the second conditional. Also, a comma is needed before 'then' to separate clauses.

× I will make bumpers for the people who. Speed their vehicle and go without any breaks or strawbs because it is very risky for the children who are playing.

✓ I will make speed bumps for the people who speed their vehicles and go without any brakes or stops because it is very risky for the children who are playing.

The word 'bumpers' is incorrect; the correct term is 'speed bumps' which are traffic calming devices. 'Speed' should be a verb here, so 'speed their vehicles' is correct. 'Breaks' should be 'brakes' referring to the vehicle's stopping mechanism. 'Strawbs' is incorrect and should be 'stops' or 'strawbs' is a mishearing; 'strawbs' is not a word. The sentence also needs to be combined properly for clarity.