交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as repeating 'there are' and unclear phrases like 'people can go save'. To improve, try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood now. In the past, there were only a few, which led to frequent car accidents. Therefore, the government has added more crosswalks to improve pedestrian safety.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as 'some roads they are close to rebuilding' and repeated phrases like 'up to hours or up to hours'. To improve, try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, avoid repeating the same words unnecessarily.

示例: Yes, I would like to change the frequent roadworks in my city. Often, roads are closed for rebuilding or repainting, which causes long traffic jams lasting several hours. If possible, I would suggest scheduling these works during off-peak hours to reduce congestion.

× Well, actually, yes, now we have a lot of cross walks around the place when I leave.

✓ Well, actually, yes, now we have a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live.

The word 'cross walks' should be one word 'crosswalks' as it is a compound noun. Also, 'when I leave' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'where I live' to indicate location. This correction addresses plural noun usage and correct preposition use.

× However, in the past it was only a few of them.

✓ However, in the past there were only a few of them.

The phrase 'it was only a few of them' is incorrect because 'a few' refers to plural, so the verb should be plural 'were' instead of singular 'was'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× So there are there are a lot of car accidents around here and the government deal with that and add a lot of new crosswalks so people can go save.

✓ So there are a lot of car accidents around here, and the government deals with that by adding a lot of new crosswalks so people can go safely.

The sentence has repetition ('there are there are') and lacks proper subject-verb agreement ('government deal' should be 'government deals'). Also, 'go save' is incorrect; it should be 'go safely' to use the correct adverb. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Most of the time some roads they are close to rebuilding or repainting.

✓ Most of the time, some roads are closed for rebuilding or repainting.

The phrase 'they are close to rebuilding' is incorrect. 'Close' should be 'closed' (past participle adjective) to indicate the roads are not open. Also, 'some roads they are' is redundant; 'some roads are' is sufficient. This corrects singular/plural and verb form issues.

× So there are a lot of traffic that can be up to hours or up to hours.

✓ So there is a lot of traffic that can last for hours.

'Traffic' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular, so 'there are' should be 'there is'. Also, 'up to hours or up to hours' is repetitive and unclear; simplified to 'last for hours' for clarity.

× So I would say that I would not rebuild.

✓ So I would say that I would not rebuild the roads during busy times.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'the roads during busy times' clarifies the meaning. The modal verb 'would' is used correctly, but the sentence needs completion for clarity.