交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm từ vựng như "crossword" thay vì "crosswalk". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: There are not many crosswalks in my area, and the ones that exist are quite old. I think the government should renovate them to make crossing safer for pedestrians.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm từ vựng như "fast" thay vì "fast recklessly". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

示例: I would like to improve traffic safety because many drivers speed recklessly, drive under the influence, and often run red lights. These behaviors cause frequent accidents in my area.

× I think there's not a lot of crossword around the place we all live but if they have enough so they still too old like the government do not make it new to people to saw and work across the crossword.

✓ I think there aren't a lot of crosswalks around the place we all live, but if there are enough, they are still too old because the government has not made them new for people to see and use to cross the crosswalks.

The word 'crossword' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'crosswalks' (singular and plural issue). Also, 'there's' (there is) should be 'there aren't' (there are not) to agree with the plural noun. The sentence also has issues with verb forms and clarity, but the main grammar problem here is singular/plural agreement.

× I think there's not a lot of crossword around the place we all live but if they have enough so they still too old like the government do not make it new to people to saw and work across the crossword.

✓ I think there aren't a lot of crosswalks around the place we all live, but if there are enough, they are still too old because the government has not made them new for people to see and use to cross the crosswalks.

The preposition 'to' in 'to saw and work across the crossword' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to see and use' or 'to walk across' the crosswalks. Also, 'saw' should be 'see' and 'work' should be 'walk'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb forms.

× I think there's traffic accident like some people there try to fast recklessly or drive when they drunk and some of them are most of them run a red light and poor rare condition so.

✓ I think there are traffic accidents because some people try to drive fast recklessly or drive when they are drunk, and most of them run red lights and the road conditions are poor.

The verb 'drunk' is incorrectly used; it should be 'are drunk' (present tense with 'to be'). Also, 'try to fast recklessly' is incorrect; it should be 'try to drive fast recklessly'. The sentence also has plural issues with 'traffic accident' which should be 'traffic accidents'. The past tense issue is mainly with 'drunk' used incorrectly without auxiliary verb.

× I think there's traffic accident like some people there try to fast recklessly or drive when they drunk and some of them are most of them run a red light and poor rare condition so.

✓ I think there are traffic accidents because some people try to drive fast recklessly or drive when they are drunk, and most of them run red lights and the road conditions are poor.

The phrase 'traffic accident' should be plural 'traffic accidents' to match the context. Also, 'a red light' should be plural 'red lights' because it refers to multiple instances. This is a singular and plural issue.