交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question first, then explain with specific details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: No, there are very few crosswalks in my area. Because of this, people often cross the road anywhere they want, which causes traffic problems. As a result, accidents happen frequently and drivers face difficulties.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer vocabulary and better sentence structure. Provide specific examples and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic system by building more crosswalks and special lanes for ambulances and emergency vehicles. Moreover, there should be more traffic police to control the roads, and everyone must follow the traffic rules strictly.

× No, in my country I haven't encountered any cause of where people cross the road as their wishes.

✓ No, in my country I haven't encountered any place where people cross the road as they wish.

The phrase 'cause of where' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'place where' to indicate the location. Also, 'as their wishes' should be 'as they wish' to correctly express the manner of crossing.

× No, in my country I haven't encountered any cause of where people cross the road as their wishes.

✓ No, in my country I haven't encountered any place where people cross the road as they wish.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used with 'wishes'; it should be 'they wish' to correctly express the action performed by the subject.

× They don't don't abide by the traffic rules or traffic police.

✓ They don't abide by the traffic rules or the traffic police.

The phrase 'abide by' is correct, but 'traffic police' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the group. Also, the repeated 'don't' is a typographical error and should be corrected.

× Often it's less to accident and uh causes trouble to the car drivers.

✓ Often, it leads to accidents and causes trouble for car drivers.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice. 'Less to accident' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'leads to accidents'. Also, 'causes trouble to the car drivers' should be 'causes trouble for car drivers' for proper preposition use.

× Yes, I want to change everything like I want to build crosswords and a link especially for ambulance and emergency cars.

✓ Yes, I want to change everything, like building crosswalks and a lane especially for ambulances and emergency vehicles.

'Crosswords' is incorrect; the correct term is 'crosswalks'. 'A link' is vague; 'a lane' is more appropriate. Also, 'ambulance and emergency cars' should be 'ambulances and emergency vehicles' for correct plural and terminology.

× There should be enough traffic police to maintain the roads and every everyone should abide by the traffickers.

✓ There should be enough traffic police to maintain the roads, and everyone should abide by the traffic rules.

'Every everyone' is redundant; only 'everyone' is needed. 'Traffickers' is incorrect; the intended word is 'traffic rules'. This corrects the quantifier and word choice errors.