交通— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
考生
I live in city which near Bangkok and my city also full of factory and other place to entertain. But however close walk in my city are few compared to Bangkok which is the capital.
考官
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
考生
I would like to set more of traffic light in my area and also have some police to recreate the area because in in the morning my area always busy with traffic jam.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
分数: 55.0建议: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องตามหลักไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'crosswalks' แทน 'close walk' และควรจัดระเบียบประโยคให้ชัดเจนและกระชับมากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ
示例: I live in a city near Bangkok, which has many factories and entertainment places. However, there are fewer crosswalks in my city compared to Bangkok, the capital.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
分数: 60.0建议: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'install more traffic lights' แทน 'set more of traffic light' และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงเหตุผลและผลลัพธ์ให้ชัดเจน นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำคำและใช้ประโยคที่กระชับ
示例: I would like to install more traffic lights and have police officers manage the area because it is always busy with traffic jams in the morning.
语法
× I live in city which near Bangkok and my city also full of factory and other place to entertain.
✓ I live in a city which is near Bangkok and my city is also full of factories and other places to entertain.
The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'city', the verb 'is' after 'which', and the plural forms 'factories' and 'places' are needed to match the context. Also, 'full of' requires plural nouns here. The preposition 'in' is correct but the sentence structure needs improvement.
× But however close walk in my city are few compared to Bangkok which is the capital.
✓ However, crosswalks in my city are few compared to Bangkok, which is the capital.
The phrase 'close walk' is incorrect; the correct term is 'crosswalks'. Also, 'however' should not be preceded by 'but'. The plural noun 'crosswalks' is needed, and a comma is required before 'which is the capital'. The preposition 'in' is correct here.
× I would like to set more of traffic light in my area and also have some police to recreate the area because in in the morning my area always busy with traffic jam.
✓ I would like to install more traffic lights in my area and also have some police to regulate the area because in the morning my area is always busy with traffic jams.
The verb 'set' is not appropriate here; 'install' is better for traffic lights. 'More of traffic light' should be 'more traffic lights' (plural). 'Recreate' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'regulate' or 'control'. The phrase 'in in the morning' has a repeated preposition. Also, 'my area always busy' lacks the verb 'is'. 'Traffic jam' should be plural 'traffic jams' to indicate multiple occurrences.
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