交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: Yes, there is a main intersection near my home with four crosswalks. These crosswalks help people cross safely, especially when the streets are busy. They make walking around the area much easier and safer.

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, pay attention to grammar and word choice to sound more natural.

示例: Yes, I would like to have a traffic light installed at the small intersection near my home. Currently, without a traffic light, drivers and pedestrians are often confused, which makes crossing the street unsafe.

× Is there is a main intersection near to my home and there is a four crosswalks in between the intersection which helps the people to walk freely when there even there is a when streets are very busy so it not only have some to walk but also helps the people.

✓ There is a main intersection near my home and there are four crosswalks between the intersection which help people to walk freely even when the streets are very busy, so it not only provides a way to walk but also helps the people.

The original sentence has incorrect use of 'Is there is' which is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'there is a four crosswalks' is wrong because 'crosswalks' is plural and requires 'there are'. The phrase 'near to my home' should be 'near my home' as 'near' does not require 'to'. The verb agreement is incorrect: 'which helps the people' should be 'which help people' because 'crosswalks' is plural. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified for clarity.

× As in my area there is an intersection, it is very small but the traffic light is not available.

✓ In my area, there is an intersection; it is very small but there is no traffic light.

The phrase 'traffic light is not available' is awkward; it is better to say 'there is no traffic light'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by separating the ideas with a semicolon and removing unnecessary words like 'As' at the beginning.

× Because of this more peoples are seems very confused when they arrive at the intersection and even the pedestrians seems very unsafe to walk over this intersection.

✓ Because of this, more people seem very confused when they arrive at the intersection and even the pedestrians seem very unsafe walking across this intersection.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'people'. The verb 'are seems' is incorrect; it should be 'seem' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. Similarly, 'pedestrians seems' should be 'pedestrians seem'. The phrase 'walk over this intersection' is better expressed as 'walking across this intersection' for natural English usage.