交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Cambodia), you should answer the question directly and clearly. Your answer should focus on the number of crosswalks and their purpose, not about people coming from other places. Try to use simple and clear sentences, and avoid unrelated information.

示例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my city. They help people cross the streets safely, especially near schools and markets.

建议: In English (Cambodia), you should give a clear opinion about what you want to change in the traffic. Use simple sentences and explain your idea with reasons or examples. Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic lights because sometimes they do not work well, causing traffic jams during rush hours.

× Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around the city they come from, come from the province, come to welcome to study and some people come to for their own business.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around the city. People come from the province to study and some come for their own business.

The original sentence incorrectly uses conjunctions and lacks proper sentence structure, making it confusing. Breaking it into clearer sentences and using appropriate conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I think there are some some pledge to change the traffic in my area because you know the money travel around 5m they.

✓ Yes, I think there are some plans to change the traffic in my area because, you know, many people travel around 5 meters.

The original sentence has repeated words, unclear phrases, and incorrect word usage ('pledge' instead of 'plans', 'money' instead of 'many people'). Correcting these and restructuring the sentence improves meaning and grammar.