交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In your answer, try to be more clear and concise. Use correct grammar and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. For example, explain why crosswalks are important in your area and how they help children.

示例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood, especially near schools. They help children cross safely despite heavy traffic and save time when going to school or other places.

建议: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain the problem with specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'this machine' and clarify what you mean. Also, correct grammar mistakes and avoid redundancy.

示例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic signals in my area because sometimes they do not work properly. As a result, cars get stuck and cause traffic jams, even when drivers try to signal each other to move.

× Yes, uh, there is a lot of crosswalk around the place where I live, especially for the child.

✓ Yes, uh, there are a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live, especially for the children.

The subject 'crosswalk' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'crosswalk' should be plural as 'crosswalks' to match the quantity 'a lot of'. 'Child' should be plural 'children' to refer to more than one child. This corrects the subject-verb agreement and noun number.

× They can go well too while having too much traffic and umm, lack of time to reach the school and the target places, so they're used by crosswalk way.

✓ They can go safely even with too much traffic and lack of time to reach the school and other places, so they use the crosswalks.

The phrase 'used by crosswalk way' is incorrect; it should be 'use the crosswalks'. Also, 'while having too much traffic' is better expressed as 'even with too much traffic'. Prepositions and phrasing are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, to be honest I would like to change a many things about traffic in my area.

✓ Yes, to be honest I would like to change many things about traffic in my area.

The quantifier 'a many' is incorrect. 'Many' is used without 'a' when referring to countable plural nouns. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× Especially when the indicators do not work for the cars and they get stopped and to stuck in the way and the traffic has keep pushing and signing to let it go but it's still stuck.

✓ Especially when the indicators do not work for the cars and they get stopped and stuck in the way, and the traffic keeps pushing and signaling to let them go, but it's still stuck.

The phrase 'to stuck' is incorrect; it should be 'stuck'. 'Has keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with the subject 'traffic'. 'Signing' should be 'signaling'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for proper usage and subject-verb agreement.