交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有词汇错误，“crosswords”应为“crosswalks”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇，并且补充具体细节，使回答更丰富。

示例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in Shenzhen because it is a highly urbanized city with well-planned pedestrian-friendly infrastructure, which makes walking safe and convenient.

建议: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明原因。

示例: Yes, I would like more roads to reduce traffic congestion. This would shorten waiting times at crosswalks and traffic lights, making travel faster and more efficient.

× Yes, I believe there are a lot of crosswords in Shenzhen because it's a highly urbanized city with many pedestrian friendly design.

✓ Yes, I believe there are a lot of crosswalks in Shenzhen because it's a highly urbanized city with many pedestrian-friendly designs.

“crosswords”应为“crosswalks”，因为题目问的是“人行横道”，复数形式应为“crosswalks”。“design”应为复数“designs”，因为前面用了“many”，表示多个设计。并且“pedestrian friendly”应加连字符，构成复合形容词。

× Yes, I hope that there would be more roads for traffic, so that the time waiting for the crosswalk and the traffic light will be shorter and there will be less traffic jam.

✓ Yes, I hope that there would be more roads for traffic, so that the waiting time for crosswalks and traffic lights will be shorter and there will be less traffic jam.

“the time waiting for the crosswalk and the traffic light”中不应使用定冠词“the”，因为这里泛指人行横道和红绿灯，且应使用复数形式“crosswalks”和“traffic lights”。另外，“time waiting”表达不够自然，改为“waiting time”更符合英语习惯。