交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、文法的に正しい文章を使い、具体的な理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood because it is a busy area and safety is important.」のように答えると良いです。

示例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood because it is a busy area and safety is important.

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べ、適切な接続詞を使って文章をつなげる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I would like to increase bicycle lanes because currently there are very few, and this would encourage more people to cycle safely.」のように答えると良いです。

示例: I would like to increase bicycle lanes because currently there are very few, and this would encourage more people to cycle safely.

× Yeah, there are a lot of crossword in my time.

✓ Yeah, there are a lot of crosswalks in my time.

The word 'crossword' is singular, but the sentence refers to 'a lot of', which requires a plural noun. Therefore, 'crossword' should be corrected to 'crosswalks' to match the plural form.

× This is because my time or fire. President tour feed safe.

✓ This is because my town is safer now.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases. It seems the student intended to say that their town is safer now. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs to be rewritten for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like to increase bicycle land because my earlier has a nullow rose, so the government needed to introduce a expanding road and.

✓ I would like to increase bicycle lanes because my area has narrow roads, so the government needs to introduce road expansion.

The modal verb 'would like to' is more appropriate for expressing desires or wishes. 'Bicycle land' should be 'bicycle lanes'. 'My earlier' is incorrect; it should be 'my area'. 'Nullow rose' is a misspelling of 'narrow roads'. 'Needed' should be 'needs' to match present tense. 'A expanding road' should be 'road expansion' or 'expand the road'. The sentence is corrected for proper modal verb usage, vocabulary, and grammar.