交通— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 注意语法和表达的准确性，避免冗余，并使用连贯词来组织信息。回答应更自然简洁：开门见山给出观点，然后用一两句具体细节支持。需要修正动词形式（convenience→convenient）、重复与双重否定（"cannot do not have to"）并删去多余词语。

示例: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home. They make it much safer for pedestrians, especially around schools and shopping areas, so people don't have to jaywalk.

建议: 减少重复并改进语法，使句子更流畅自然。应先直接回答（想改变交通灯时长），然后用一到两句具体措施和预期效果作为支持。修正动词形式（extend the green phase）、删除重复词（"to reduce the to reduce"、"the the"）并使用连接词如"for example"或"so"。

示例: Yes, I'd adjust the traffic light timings to cut waiting times. For example, extending the green phase during evening peak hours would ease congestion and shorten queues.

× I think it is safer and convenience to pedestrians to cross the walk, especially around the schools and the shopping areas so pedestrians cannot do not have to jaywalk.

✓ I think it is safer and more convenient for pedestrians to use the crosswalk, especially around schools and shopping areas, so pedestrians do not have to jaywalk.

句中“safer and convenience”混用了形容词和名词，应该并列两个形容词，改为“safer and more convenient”。“to pedestrians to cross the walk”措辞不自然，正确搭配是“convenient for pedestrians to use the crosswalk”。另外“cannot do not have to”出现双重否定，需改为“do not have to”。建议：注意并列结构中词性一致，使用固定搭配“convenient for someone to do something”，避免双重否定。

× I think it is safer and convenience to pedestrians to cross the walk, especially around the schools and the shopping areas so pedestrians cannot do not have to jaywalk.

✓ I think it is safer and more convenient for pedestrians to use the crosswalk, especially around schools and shopping areas, so pedestrians do not have to jaywalk.

原句中使用了不正确的介词短语“to pedestrians to cross the walk”。通常说法是“convenient for pedestrians to do sth.”，以及“use the crosswalk”比“cross the walk”更地道。建议：学习常见搭配（convenient for someone，use the crosswalk）并多加练习。

× I think it is safer and convenience to pedestrians to cross the walk, especially around the schools and the shopping areas so pedestrians cannot do not have to jaywalk.

✓ I think it is safer and more convenient for pedestrians to use the crosswalk, especially around schools and shopping areas, so pedestrians do not have to jaywalk.

原句中“the schools and the shopping areas”中的定冠词“the”可以省略以更自然泛指，且“crosswalks”或“the crosswalk”需与上下文一致。建议：在泛指复数名词时通常不用“the”，并确保单复数和上下文一致。

× Well, I would like to address the traffic lights timing to reduce the to reduce the waiting times.

✓ Well, I would like to adjust the traffic light timing to reduce waiting times.

原句“address the traffic lights timing”介词和名词顺序不当，且“to reduce the to reduce the waiting times”有重复。应改为“adjust the traffic light timing to reduce waiting times”。建议：注意动词与名词搭配（adjust timing），删除重复短语，并将副词或短语放在句尾以表达目的。

× For example, we can extend the green, we can extending the green phase to in the evening peaks so that it can ease the the congestion and short shorten queues.

✓ For example, we can extend the green phase in the evening peak periods so that it can ease congestion and shorten queues.

原句中“we can extending”动词形式错误，情态动词can后应接动词原形“extend”。另外“extend the green, we can extending the green phase to in the evening peaks”有冗余和介词使用错误，改为“extend the green phase in the evening peak periods”。“the the congestion and short shorten queues”有重复和动词形式错误，应为“ease congestion and shorten queues”。建议：情态动词后用动词原形；避免重复；注意名词短语的固定表达（green phase, peak periods, ease congestion）。

× For example, we can extend the green, we can extending the green phase to in the evening peaks so that it can ease the the congestion and short shorten queues.

✓ For example, we can extend the green phase in the evening peak periods so that it can ease congestion and shorten queues.

句中多处冗余和重复（“we can extend the green, we can extending...”，“the the congestion”，“short shorten”），导致结构混乱。将目的状语（in the evening peak periods）放在动词短语之后更清晰。建议：说话时先理清要点，避免重复词语，保持句子简洁。