购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваш ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, избегать повторений и излишних слов, а также четко выражать свои мысли. Попробуйте строить ответ с главной мыслью и поддерживающими деталями, используя связующие слова.

示例: Yes, I love shopping because it helps me relax. I usually buy new clothes for my outfits. I go shopping twice a week, and it makes me feel happy and comfortable.

建议: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать простые предложения и логично связывать идеи. Также важно использовать правильные слова и выражения, чтобы сделать ответ понятным.

示例: I don't usually compare prices, but I try to find stores with close prices. For example, I often go to a magazine store called Buzzer in my country to buy clothes for my outfits.

建议: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется строить предложения правильно, использовать связующие слова для логичности и давать конкретные причины или примеры, чтобы обосновать ответ.

示例: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop alone. However, if I go with my mom, it becomes easier because I trust her choices.

建议: Ответ очень непонятен из-за ошибок и отсутствия логической структуры. Рекомендуется ясно выражать свое мнение, использовать правильную грамматику и давать конкретные причины или примеры для поддержки своего мнения.

示例: I don't agree that expensive products are always better. Sometimes cheaper products can be good too. I usually prefer expensive products because they last longer, but it depends on the item.

× Yes, of course I love shopping because.

✓ Yes, of course I love shopping.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the thought, resulting in a sentence structure error. To correct it, remove 'because' or complete the sentence with a reason.

× I can when I shopping I usually relax because I usually buy new clothes is for my outfit that's why I usually go to shopping and twice a week and it makes me happy an relaxable and comfortable.

✓ When I go shopping, I usually relax because I buy new clothes for my outfit. That's why I usually go shopping twice a week, and it makes me happy, relaxed, and comfortable.

Incorrect verb form 'shopping' used instead of 'go shopping'. Also, sentence is run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Correct verb forms and sentence segmentation improve clarity.

× that's why I usually go to shopping and twice a week and it makes me happy an relaxable and comfortable.

✓ That's why I usually go shopping twice a week, and it makes me happy, relaxed, and comfortable.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'shopping'. The correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'relaxable' is not a correct adjective; 'relaxed' is appropriate.

× I'm not this kind of person who compared prices but I usually try to show how to price is this closes then I go to them.

✓ I'm not the kind of person who compares prices, but I usually try to see which price is closest, then I go to that store.

Incorrect pronoun usage and verb tense. 'Show' is incorrect; 'see' fits better. 'Price is this closes' is unclear; corrected to 'which price is closest'. Also, 'compared' should be 'compares' for present tense.

× A magazine I know magazine buzzer it calls in our country, but there so I went to there to buy new clothes is for my outfits.

✓ There is a magazine called 'Buzzer' in our country, so I went there to buy new clothes for my outfits.

Sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected by restructuring sentence for clarity and proper use of articles and prepositions.

× Yes, this is really difficult for me to make choices because if I go to alone, I never showed the clauses.

✓ Yes, it is really difficult for me to make choices because if I go alone, I never show the clothes.

Incorrect pronoun 'this' replaced with 'it' for general statement. 'Go to alone' is incorrect; 'go alone' is correct. 'Showed the clauses' is incorrect; 'show the clothes' is intended.

× If I if I will go to my mom, it will be easy for me because I usually believe my mom's choice.

✓ If I go with my mom, it will be easy for me because I usually trust my mom's choice.

Incorrect use of 'will' in conditional sentence; simple present 'go' is correct. 'Believe' is better replaced with 'trust' in this context.

× I don't know because her choices seems like.

✓ I don't know because her choices seem good to me.

Sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Added 'good to me' to complete the thought and corrected subject-verb agreement ('choices seem').

× But I don't agree this that statement because everyone has a choice.

✓ But I don't agree with that statement because everyone has a choice.

Missing preposition 'with' after 'agree'. 'This that' is redundant; corrected to 'that'.

× They are need to choose.

✓ They need to choose.

Incorrect use of 'are' with 'need'. 'Need' is a modal verb here and does not require 'are'.

× Maybe shipper one may be expensive, bad expensive 1 you we are.

✓ Maybe the cheaper one may be expensive, but the expensive one is better.

Sentence is unclear and contains many errors. Corrected to convey intended meaning contrasting cheaper and expensive products.

× I so long years then and cheaper one.

✓ I have used expensive products for many years, then switched to cheaper ones.

Sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reconstructed to express experience with expensive and cheaper products.

× That's why I usually prefer to shoes expensive products.

✓ That's why I usually prefer to choose expensive products.

Incorrect verb 'shoes' used instead of 'choose'. Corrected verb and sentence structure.