购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as 'becaused' and 'knew'. Try to use correct grammar and be more specific about what you like to buy. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because I like buying useful items and fashionable clothes. For example, I often look for trendy dresses and comfortable shoes like slingbacks that are currently popular.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear, especially the phrase 'a very less luxurious things for my'. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be more precise.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices because I have a limited budget as a middle-class person. Therefore, I try to find good quality products that are affordable and suit my financial plan for the month.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as 'comfort rible' and 'Reza's shoes'. Try to organise your answer logically, use correct grammar, and provide clear supporting details with linking words.

示例: Yes, I sometimes find it hard to choose what to buy, so I ask my father for advice. His suggestions help me select comfortable and suitable items, like a pair of shoes that fit well and look good.

建议: Your answer is too long and contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Keep your answer concise and avoid repetition.

示例: I don't believe expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, affordable items offer great value and meet our needs just as well, so it's important to consider quality rather than price alone.

× Yes I do like shopping becaused I love to buy more productive things and trendy dresses.

✓ Yes, I do like shopping because I love to buy more practical things and trendy dresses.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct word is 'because'. Also, 'productive things' is not appropriate in this context; 'practical things' fits better. This is a vocabulary choice rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it improves clarity.

× That is available in the market and I like to buy knew slingbacks and so on.

✓ Those are available in the market and I like to buy new slingbacks and so on.

The demonstrative pronoun 'That' should be plural 'Those' to agree with the plural noun implied. 'Knew' is a past tense verb and incorrect here; the adjective 'new' is correct. This is an adjective usage error.

× Yes I do compare prices when I shop becauses a I'm a middle class girl so have to compare the prices to match my budget for that month.

✓ Yes, I do compare prices when I shop because I am a middle-class girl, so I have to compare the prices to match my budget for that month.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. The phrase 'a I'm' is incorrect; it should be 'I am'. Also, 'middle class' should be hyphenated as 'middle-class' when used as an adjective. These are errors in conjunction and sentence structure.

× And I don't like to shop a very less luxurious things for my.

✓ And I don't like to shop for very few luxurious things for myself.

The phrase 'a very less luxurious things' is incorrect; 'less' is uncountable and cannot be used with 'things' (plural countable noun). 'Very few' is the correct quantifier for countable nouns. Also, 'for my' is incomplete; it should be 'for myself'.

× Yes, it is quite difficult for me to make choices when I shopped and that time I'll go for my father's choice, so I'll get knew things and it is more suitable and comfort rible for me like a Reza's shoes and so on.

✓ Yes, it is quite difficult for me to make choices when I shop, and at that time I go for my father's choice, so I get new things that are more suitable and comfortable for me, like Reza's shoes and so on.

The verb 'shopped' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'shop'. 'I'll' (I will) is inconsistent with the present tense narrative; 'I go' and 'I get' are better. 'Knew' is incorrect; 'new' is the adjective needed. 'Comfort rible' is a misspelling of 'comfortable'. 'A Reza's shoes' is incorrect; 'like Reza's shoes' is correct.

× And it is a easy for me to shop.

✓ And it is easy for me to shop.

The article 'a' should not be used before the adjective 'easy' because 'easy' begins with a vowel sound. The correct phrase is 'it is easy'.

× Definitely I do not completely agree with this statement that the expensive products are always better than the cheaper ones because sometimes there cheaper ones will be the best for that price and it will get it will be more useful for us to buy new things with a cheap cost an though it is so cheap it.

✓ Definitely, I do not completely agree with this statement that expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes the cheaper ones are the best for that price and they are more useful for us to buy new things at a low cost, even though they are cheap.

The phrase 'there cheaper ones' is incorrect; it should be 'the cheaper ones'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be broken into clearer parts. 'It will get it will be' is redundant and incorrect; 'they are' is correct. 'With a cheap cost' should be 'at a low cost'. 'An though' is a misspelling of 'even though'. These are pronoun and sentence structure errors.