购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onekta unclear. Apnar answer ke aro natural korte hole, simple ar clear sentence use korun. Apni direct question er uttor din, tarpor kichu supporting details din, jemon karon ba example. Apnar answer 5 sentence er moddhe rakhun.

示例: Yes, I love shopping, especially when I feel sad or stressed. It helps me feel better and encourages me. For example, if I have some free time and money, I usually go shopping with my friends or family. Sometimes, they complain that I shop too much, but it is my way to relax.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni linking words use korte paren jate answer ta logical hoy. Apni aro specific example dite paren jate answer ta bhalo lage.

示例: Yes, I am a budget-conscious person, so I always compare prices before buying anything. For example, I usually check prices online first, and if the physical store is more expensive, I prefer to buy online. This way, I can save money and get the best deal.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu sentence onekta unclear ar grammar error ache. Apni direct question er uttor din, tarpor supporting details din, ar linking words use korun. Apni specific example dite paren jate answer ta bhalo hoy.

示例: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when I shop because I often get confused. For instance, if I like a dress, I hesitate to buy it immediately because I think I might find a better or cheaper one later. This makes decision-making quite hard for me.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar ar sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni linking words use korun jate answer ta aro coherent hoy. Apni aro specific example dite paren.

示例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. For example, I saw an expensive dress recently that was made of poor material. However, I later found a similar dress at a lower price, which was made of good material and looked better. So, price does not always guarantee quality.

× Is I love shopping a lot especially when I'm saying building something or I am very much sad or depressed.

✓ I love shopping a lot especially when I'm doing something or when I am very sad or depressed.

The sentence starts incorrectly with 'Is I' which is ungrammatical. Also, 'saying building something' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'doing something'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× If I had money I would go to the shopping.

✓ If I had money, I would go shopping.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require 'the'. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for correct punctuation.

× My friends and my mom often complain about my shopping VVL.

✓ My friends and my mom often complain about my shopping habit.

The phrase 'shopping VVL' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or typo. It should be replaced with a correct noun like 'habit' to make sense.

× Is I am in budget person so I often compare prices.

✓ I am a budget-conscious person, so I often compare prices.

Starting the sentence with 'Is I am' is incorrect. Also, 'in budget person' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'a budget-conscious person' or 'a person on a budget'.

× Of things I want to mine.

✓ Of things I want to buy.

The phrase 'want to mine' is incorrect; 'mine' is a verb meaning to extract minerals. The intended verb is likely 'buy'.

× For example, I lookout for the prices online before I go to the physical shop.

✓ For example, I look out for prices online before I go to the physical shop.

The verb phrase is 'look out for' (two words), not 'lookout' (one word, which is a noun). Also, 'the prices' can be simplified to 'prices'.

× Then if I find the physical shop more expensive, then I buy in online.

✓ Then if I find the physical shop more expensive, I buy online.

The phrase 'buy in online' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'buy online' without 'in'.

× Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I am a very confused person if I like on thing.

✓ Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I am a very confused person if I like one thing.

The phrase 'if I like on thing' is incorrect; it should be 'if I like one thing'. Also, the sentence is slightly awkward but acceptable after correction.

× Is specially particularly on race if I like the dress.

✓ Especially when it comes to choosing a dress.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Is specially particularly on race' does not make sense. A clearer phrase is 'Especially when it comes to choosing a dress.'

× I keep thinking next shops days will be more beautiful and more cheaper so it is difficult for me.

✓ I keep thinking that the shops in the coming days will have more beautiful and cheaper items, so it is difficult for me.

The phrase 'next shops days' is incorrect and confusing. It should be rephrased to 'shops in the coming days'. Also, 'more cheaper' is incorrect; 'cheaper' alone suffices.

× No, I don't think expensive products are always better than the cheaper swan.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are always better than the cheaper ones.

The word 'swan' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'ones' to refer to cheaper products.

× For example I saw a dress up earlier that day which was very expensive but was not a great material.

✓ For example, I saw a dress earlier that day which was very expensive but was not made of great material.

The phrase 'dress up' is incorrect; 'dress' alone is sufficient. Also, 'was not a great material' is ungrammatical; it should be 'was not made of great material'.

× But later I found a similar dress in a cheaper price but was a good material and a good looking more.

✓ But later I found a similar dress at a cheaper price that was made of good material and looked better.

The phrase 'in a cheaper price' is incorrect; it should be 'at a cheaper price'. Also, 'was a good material' is incorrect; it should be 'was made of good material'. 'A good looking more' is ungrammatical; 'looked better' is correct.