购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to explore new trends. Moreover, I often shop with my friends and relatives, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes. Please focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and use correct sentence structures. Avoid confusing phrases and ensure your answer is coherent.

示例: I usually compare prices when I shop because I want to get the best deal. This helps me save money and avoid overpaying for products.

建议: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and has grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your point clearly. Also, avoid unnecessary pauses or breaks in your speech.

示例: It is not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I usually go with my friends, and they help me by giving their opinions.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons, and avoid repeating the same words. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: In my opinion, expensive products are generally better because they are made with higher quality materials. However, this is not always the case, as some cheaper products can also be good.

× I like to shop new things which are in trend and I purchased the these things with my friends and relatives in the market and I like shopping because I am exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase it.

✓ I like to shop for new things which are in trend and I purchase these things with my friends and relatives in the market. I like shopping because I am an exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase them.

The sentence has plural and singular noun agreement issues such as 'the these things' which is incorrect; it should be 'these things'. Also, 'purchase it' should be 'purchase them' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. Correct use of plural and singular forms is important for clarity.

× I like to shop new things which are in trend and I purchased the these things with my friends and relatives in the market and I like shopping because I am exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase it.

✓ I like to shop for new things which are in trend and I purchase these things with my friends and relatives in the market. I like shopping because I am an exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase them.

The sentence mixes past tense 'purchased' with present tense 'like' and 'explore'. Since the context is general preference, present tense 'purchase' is more appropriate for consistency.

× I like to shop new things which are in trend and I purchased the these things with my friends and relatives in the market and I like shopping because I am exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase it.

✓ I like to shop for new things which are in trend and I purchase these things with my friends and relatives in the market. I like shopping because I am an exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase them.

The phrase 'shop new things' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'shop for new things'. Prepositions are important to convey the correct meaning.

× I like to shop new things which are in trend and I purchased the these things with my friends and relatives in the market and I like shopping because I am exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase it.

✓ I like to shop for new things which are in trend and I purchase these things with my friends and relatives in the market. I like shopping because I am an exploring man and I explore new things in the market and purchase them.

The pronoun 'it' is used incorrectly to refer to 'things' which is plural; the correct pronoun is 'them'.

× I do not compare prices when I show becauses shopkeeper can. Sell me this thing rate to rate and they can end the show. Creeper cannot. Make profit from me.

✓ I do not compare prices when I shop because the shopkeeper can sell me this thing rate to rate and they can end the show. The shopkeeper cannot make profit from me.

The verb 'show' is incorrect; it should be 'shop' in present tense. Also, sentence fragments like 'Creeper cannot. Make profit from me.' are incorrect and need to be combined properly.

× I do not compare prices when I show becauses shopkeeper can. Sell me this thing rate to rate and they can end the show. Creeper cannot. Make profit from me.

✓ I do not compare prices when I shop because the shopkeeper can sell me this thing rate to rate and they can end the show. The shopkeeper cannot make profit from me.

The pronoun 'they' is used ambiguously; it should refer clearly to 'shopkeeper' which is singular, so 'he' or 'she' is better. Also, 'Creeper' seems to be a typo for 'shopkeeper' or 'seller'.

× I do not compare prices when I show becauses shopkeeper can. Sell me this thing rate to rate and they can end the show. Creeper cannot. Make profit from me.

✓ I do not compare prices when I shop because the shopkeeper can sell me this thing rate to rate and they cannot make profit from me.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It is not difficult to make a choice when I show because I. Go to shopping with my friends and they give opinion when I select anything. To shop.

✓ It is not difficult to make a choice when I shop because I go shopping with my friends and they give opinions when I select anything to buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Also, 'give opinion' should be 'give opinions'.

× It is not difficult to make a choice when I show because I. Go to shopping with my friends and they give opinion when I select anything. To shop.

✓ It is not difficult to make a choice when I shop because I go shopping with my friends and they give opinions when I select anything to buy.

The pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'friends', but 'give opinion' should be plural 'give opinions' to match the plural subject.

× From my viewpoint, the expensive products are always better because the expensive products are made and buy expensive things, and the quality of expensive products is better than cheaper ones.

✓ From my viewpoint, expensive products are always better because they are made with expensive materials, and the quality of expensive products is better than that of cheaper ones.

The phrase 'made and buy expensive things' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'made with expensive materials'. Also, 'the expensive products' is unnecessarily repeated; 'they' can be used for conciseness.