购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói lan man. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially for girly items like dresses, clothes, and accessories. It is one of my favorite hobbies.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, tránh lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices because I am a student and have a limited budget. Therefore, I try to find the cheapest options when I shop.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: No, it is not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I know exactly what I like and want. So, I don't waste much time deciding.

建议: Bạn nên cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

示例: Yes, I believe expensive products are usually better because, as the saying goes, 'you get what you pay for.' Higher price often means better quality and durability.

× I really like shopping somethings girly like the dress, the clothes or the accessory of a God.

✓ I really like shopping for girly things like dresses, clothes, or accessories.

The word 'somethings' is incorrect; it should be 'things' to indicate plural items. Also, 'the dress' and 'the accessory' should be pluralized to 'dresses' and 'accessories' to match the general sense of items liked. 'Accessory of a God' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'accessories' for clarity.

× Am I am into visa moment?

✓ Am I into this moment?

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended to ask a question about being into something at the moment. Corrected to 'Am I into this moment?' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I don't have much money so comparing price either.

✓ I don't have much money so I compare prices.

The phrase 'comparing price either' is incorrect. The verb should be in simple present 'compare' to match the subject 'I'. Also, 'price' should be plural 'prices' when talking about comparing multiple items.

× Must thing I have to do when I go shopping I compare price to nowhere by the cheaper things in swift.

✓ The main thing I have to do when I go shopping is compare prices to find the cheaper things quickly.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Must thing' should be 'main thing'. 'Compare price to nowhere by the cheaper things in swift' is unclear; corrected to 'compare prices to find the cheaper things quickly' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No because I'm I am the person that really know what what I like and what I want so I don't have much.

✓ No, because I am the person who really knows what I like and what I want, so I don't waste much time.

The sentence has repetition ('I'm I am'), missing commas, and incomplete ending ('so I don't have much'). Corrected to proper subject-verb agreement ('who really knows'), added commas, and completed the thought with 'so I don't waste much time'.

× I don't waste much time to mix choice.

✓ I don't waste much time making choices.

The phrase 'to mix choice' is incorrect. The correct form is 'making choices' to express the action of deciding.

× Is it quiet easy for me too?

✓ It is quite easy for me too.

The sentence is a question but contextually should be a statement. 'quiet' is a misspelling of 'quite'. Corrected to a statement with proper spelling.

× So I think the expensive product always better than cheaper.

✓ So I think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'cheaper ones'. Also, 'always better' needs the verb 'are' for correct sentence structure.