购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và logic hơn.

示例: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax after stressful school days. Moreover, it gives me the opportunity to meet new people and enjoy exciting experiences.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn rời rạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng nối các ý lại với nhau bằng từ nối và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because my family is not very wealthy. Therefore, I need to save money carefully, especially since I am currently saving to buy a new laptop.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lủng củng và thiếu liên kết giữa các câu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

示例: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because my mom used to buy everything for me when I was a child. Since I have just started shopping on my own recently, I still find it hard to make decisions.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và bổ sung lý do hoặc ví dụ để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

示例: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. For me, I usually choose items that suit my needs and preferences rather than just focusing on the price. Comfort and quality are my top priorities when shopping.

× Wish shopping helps me.

✓ I wish shopping helped me.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb tense. 'Wish' requires a subject and the verb in the past tense to express a desire about a present situation. Correct structure is 'I wish shopping helped me.'

× Feel relaxed after stressful school times.

✓ I feel relaxed after stressful school times.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I'. Every complete sentence requires a subject and a verb. Adding 'I' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× It also gives me the option.

✓ It also gives me options.

The word 'option' is singular, but the context suggests multiple possibilities, so the plural 'options' is more appropriate here.

× The opportunity to be able to meet more people.

✓ It gives me the opportunity to meet more people.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and subject. Adding 'It gives me' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Anne.

✓ And,

The word 'Anne' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'and'. Replacing it with 'and' connects the ideas properly.

× I really appreciate the excitement.

✓ I really appreciate the excitement it provides me.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it provides me' clarifies what excitement is being appreciated.

× Provide me.

✓ It provides me.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' makes the sentence complete.

× Whenever I buy something, I will always.

✓ Whenever I buy something, I always take the price into consideration.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the main verb phrase. Completing the sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× Tickets price into consideration.

✓ Take the price into consideration.

The phrase 'Tickets price' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'take the price into consideration' to express considering the price.

× Because my family is not that wealthy, Anne, I'm currently saving up some money to buy a new laptop.

✓ Because my family is not that wealthy, and I'm currently saving up some money to buy a new laptop.

'Anne' is likely a mishearing of 'and'. Replacing it with 'and' connects the clauses properly.

× Yes. As a child, my mom used to buy like everything I need for me.

✓ Yes. As a child, my mom used to buy almost everything I needed for me.

The phrase 'like everything' is informal and awkward here. 'Almost everything' is more appropriate. Also, 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match 'used to'.

× And I just thought I just started shopping on my own recently so.

✓ And I just thought I started shopping on my own recently, so

The sentence is incomplete and has redundant 'just'. Removing redundancy and completing the sentence improves clarity.

× Is still very, very hard for me to make my own decisions.

✓ It is still very, very hard for me to make my own decisions.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' completes the sentence.

× I usually choose something that suits me rather than something that's sometimes more expensive.

✓ I usually choose something that suits me rather than something that is just more expensive.

The word 'sometimes' is misplaced and confusing. Replacing it with 'just' clarifies the comparison.

× The setting my.

✓ Setting is my

The phrase is incomplete and unclear. It likely intends to say 'Setting is my' something, so needs completion.

× Favorite is.

✓ favorite is

This is a fragment and needs to be connected to the previous or next phrase.

× The. Top priority when? Shopping.

✓ The top priority when shopping.

The sentence has unnecessary punctuation and is fragmented. Removing extra punctuation and combining the phrase makes it correct.