购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is quite long and a bit unclear due to some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and structured by directly answering the question first, then adding a supporting detail. Avoid repeating ideas and focus on clarity.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially when I go out with my friends. However, I often prefer window shopping because I want to avoid spending too much money since I don't have a job to support my expenses.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Make sure to use correct verb forms and complete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons for your opinion.

示例: Yes, I often compare prices between in-store and online because it helps me find the best deals quickly. I think online price comparison is a very useful tool for saving money.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your points.

示例: No, I don't find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I usually have a specific style in mind. However, sometimes I can be a bit picky, but overall, I know what I want before I go shopping.

建议: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting reasons, using linking words for coherence.

示例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because often you pay more for the brand and advertising. Therefore, I prefer buying from smaller brands that offer good quality at lower prices.

× Oh yeah, I love shopping a lot is specially when I go out with my friends and just window shopping because sometimes it takes me too much money to buy things and I didn't have I don't have a work to pay for that.

✓ Oh yeah, I love shopping a lot, especially when I go out with my friends and just window shopping because sometimes it takes me too much money to buy things and I don't have a job to pay for that.

The phrase 'is specially' is incorrect; it should be 'especially' to express emphasis. Also, 'I didn't have I don't have a work' is incorrect; 'work' as an uncountable noun here should be replaced with 'a job' to indicate employment. The definite article 'the' is not needed before 'work' in this context.

× Oh yes, I often compares the. Prices between in store. Price is an online prices because you know if you take it further and you can immediately with the price online and I think it's a genius invention.

✓ Oh yes, I often compare the prices between in-store prices and online prices because you know if you take it further you can immediately compare with the price online and I think it's a genius invention.

The verb 'compares' does not agree with the subject 'I'; it should be 'compare'. Also, 'in store. Price is an online prices' is fragmented and incorrect; it should be 'in-store prices and online prices'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Oh yes, I often compares the. Prices between in store. Price is an online prices because you know if you take it further and you can immediately with the price online and I think it's a genius invention.

✓ Oh yes, I often compare the prices between in-store prices and online prices because you know if you take it further you can immediately compare with the price online and I think it's a genius invention.

The preposition 'between' is correctly used to compare two things, but the phrase 'between in store. Price is an online prices' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'between in-store prices and online prices' to properly connect the two items being compared.

× I don't think it's really difficult, difficult for me to make choices because. I usually have a specific style and I know how I'm going to get before go shopping so. Sometimes I will be too picky and but I don't think making choices.

✓ I don't think it's really difficult for me to make choices because I usually have a specific style and I know what I'm going to get before I go shopping. Sometimes I can be too picky, but I don't think making choices is difficult.

The original sentence has fragmented and incomplete clauses, such as 'because.' and 'so.' which disrupt the flow. Also, 'how I'm going to get before go shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'what I'm going to get before I go shopping'. The conjunction 'and but' is redundant; only one is needed. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't really think that because sometimes are expensive products is more like paying for their brands, paying for their promotion and you know advertising can cost a lot.

✓ No, I don't really think that because sometimes expensive products are more like paying for their brands, paying for their promotion, and you know advertising can cost a lot.

The phrase 'sometimes are expensive products is' is incorrect. The subject 'expensive products' should come before the verb 'are'. Also, 'their' correctly refers to 'brands' and 'promotion'. The sentence is corrected to proper subject-verb order and pronoun use.

× So I would prefer to buy things from smaller breads and instead of like luxury brands.

✓ So I would prefer to buy things from smaller brands instead of luxury brands.

The word 'breads' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'brands'. Also, the phrase 'and instead of like luxury brands' is incorrect; 'and' is unnecessary and 'like' should be removed for clarity. The sentence is corrected to properly express preference.