购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์ เช่น "I will" และ "help me to chasing clothes" ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างมีเหตุผล

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially when I go with my friends. They help me choose clothes, like skirts, and we have a great time together.

建议: คำตอบของคุณดีแล้ว แต่ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้คำพหูพจน์ "prices" และปรับคำว่า "too much anxiously" ให้เหมาะสม นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

示例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to find the best deals and save money. For instance, before buying clothes or electronics, I check different stores or websites to ensure I get good quality at a reasonable price, which helps me avoid overspending.

建议: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและโครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "it's hard for me to buy something" และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อความสมบูรณ์ของคำตอบ

示例: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because, as a student with limited money, I have to think carefully before buying anything to avoid wasting my budget.

建议: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์มาก ควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมให้เหตุผลหรือยกตัวอย่างที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกัน

示例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, I once bought a lipstick that was cheap but worked very well, while some expensive ones didn't suit me.

× I really enjoy when I go to shopping because I can tell them everything and they can help me to chasing clothes or some skirt.

✓ I really enjoy going shopping because I can tell them everything and they can help me choose clothes or some skirts.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), so 'enjoy when I go to shopping' is incorrect. Also, 'help me to chasing' is incorrect; it should be 'help me choose' because 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb. Additionally, 'some skirt' should be pluralized to 'some skirts' to match the plural context.

× Yes, I always compare price when I shop because I want to find the best deals and save money.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to find the best deals and save money.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items or options being compared.

× For example, before buying clothes or electronics, I check different store or website to make sure I get good quality at a reasonable price.

✓ For example, before buying clothes or electronics, I check different stores or websites to make sure I get good quality at a reasonable price.

The nouns 'store' and 'website' should be plural ('stores' and 'websites') because the speaker is referring to multiple places to compare.

× This helps me avoid spending too much anxiously.

✓ This helps me avoid spending too much money.

The adverb 'anxiously' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is about spending too much money, not about the manner of spending. 'Too much' should be followed by a noun like 'money'.

× Yes, it is, because now I am a student and I can make money, so when I go shopping it's hard me to buy something because I have to think over when I want to buy something.

✓ Yes, it is, because now I am a student and I have limited money, so when I go shopping it's hard for me to buy something because I have to think carefully before I want to buy something.

The phrase 'it's hard me to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'it's hard for me to buy'. Also, 'I can make money' is unclear in this context; 'I have limited money' fits better. 'Think over' should be 'think carefully before' to improve clarity.

× No I don't I I think when I was young but now I'm grow up and I can compare it like a lipstick in a tie.

✓ No, I don't. I thought so when I was young, but now I've grown up and I can compare it, like a lipstick and a tie.

The sentence lacks punctuation and has pronoun and verb form errors. 'I think when I was young' should be past tense 'I thought so when I was young'. 'I'm grow up' is incorrect; it should be 'I've grown up'. The phrase 'compare it like a lipstick in a tie' is unclear; 'like a lipstick and a tie' is more logical.

× It's only when I 199 baht but when I go to another country is the price is more other and when I use.

✓ It only costs 199 baht, but when I go to another country, the price is higher, and when I use it...

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'I 199 baht' lacks a verb; it should be 'It costs 199 baht'. 'The price is more other' is incorrect; it should be 'the price is higher'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.