购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I definitely like shopping. Nowadays, many young people enjoy it because it's a common and relaxing activity after a hard day's work.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用更连贯的句子，并明确说明比较价格的原因。

示例: Yes, I usually compare prices when shopping because it helps me save money. Also, buying at a lower price makes me feel like I got a better deal.

建议: 回答较为口语化且有语法错误。建议使用更正式的表达，避免重复，并清晰表达观点。

示例: It used to be difficult for me to make choices when shopping, but now I have developed my own style, so I usually know what suits me and what I want to buy.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

示例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. The best choice is what you really want, not just the most popular or costly item.

× nobody will doesn't like shopping.

✓ nobody doesn't like shopping.

这里的主语是'nobody'，属于第三人称单数，助动词用'does'，否定形式应为'doesn't'，而不是'will doesn't'。'will'和'doesn't'不能连用。正确表达是否定句，应该用'nobody doesn't like'。

× it's also a relaxing way for the people who have hard work.

✓ it's also a relaxing way for people who have hard work.

'the people'在这里不需要定冠词'the'，因为指的是泛指的人群。

× if you can get a thing, buy a cheaper price.

✓ if you can get a thing at a cheaper price.

'buy a cheaper price'是不正确的表达，应该用'get something at a cheaper price'，介词'at'表示价格。

× it can feel you got this thing with more.

✓ it can make you feel like you got this thing for more.

'feel you got this thing with more'结构不正确，应该用'make you feel like...'来表达让你感觉到。

× which one is quite fitting me.

✓ which one quite fits me.

'fitting me'用法不当，应该用动词'fits'来表达'适合我'。

× I know what do I want to choose

✓ I know what I want to choose

间接疑问句中，语序应为陈述语序，不能用疑问语序。

× you should know what do you want to have

✓ you should know what you want to have

同上，间接疑问句中语序应为陈述语序。

× what's the popu population, what are the popular one

✓ what's the population, what are the popular ones

'population'拼写错误，应为'population'；'popular one'应为复数形式'popular ones'，因为前面用的是复数动词'are'。