购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I and my mother' nên là 'my mother and I'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'weekend' nhiều lần. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu trả lời ngắn gọn trong 3-5 câu.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially during weekends. My mother and I usually go to the supermarket to buy what we need. Shopping together makes me feel happy and helps me relieve stress.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'if I vote thing' không đúng, có thể là 'if I find something'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

示例: Definitely, I always compare prices when I shop because if I find something too expensive, I might not have enough money to buy it.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng cung cấp lý do cụ thể và rõ ràng.

示例: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping because there are many options and some products are expensive. Therefore, I usually take time to decide carefully.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'not way better' nên là 'not always better'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'pro productivity'.

示例: In my opinion, expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones because there are many affordable products in my country that are of good quality. Therefore, I believe price does not always reflect quality.

× On my weekend I and my mother always go to supermarket to buy anything we need and I feel very happy and reduce the stress when I go shopping with my mother.

✓ On my weekends, my mother and I always go to the supermarket to buy anything we need, and I feel very happy and less stressed when I go shopping with my mother.

The phrase 'On my weekend' should be plural 'On my weekends' to indicate regular occurrence. 'I and my mother' should be 'my mother and I' for correct order and subject form. 'to supermarket' needs the definite article 'the' as 'to the supermarket'. 'reduce the stress' should be 'less stressed' to correctly express the feeling. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× Definitely, I always compare prices when I shop because in my opinion if I vote thing is a very expensive then I don't have enough money to buy it.

✓ Definitely, I always compare prices when I shop because in my opinion if a thing is very expensive then I don't have enough money to buy it.

The phrase 'if I vote thing' is incorrect; it should be 'if a thing' to correctly use the singular indefinite article. Also, 'a very expensive' should be 'very expensive' without 'a' because 'expensive' is an adjective modifying 'thing'. These changes correct singular/plural and article usage.

× Absolutely. I think it's very difficult for me to make a choice when I shop because I think it has a lot of things. It's very expensive, then I've very successfully before making a decision.

✓ Absolutely. I think it's very difficult for me to make a choice when I shop because there are many options. Some are very expensive, so I have to be very careful before making a decision.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect structure: 'I think it has a lot of things' is vague; 'there are many options' is clearer. 'It's very expensive' lacks a clear subject; specifying 'Some are very expensive' clarifies meaning. 'I've very successfully before making a decision' is ungrammatical; 'I have to be very careful before making a decision' conveys intended meaning. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my opinion I think expensive products not way better than cheaper ones because in my country it has many cheaper products. It's very pro productivity for everyone. Then I think it's not always better.

✓ In my opinion, I think expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones because in my country there are many cheaper products. They are very productive for everyone. So, I think they are not always better.

The sentence 'expensive products not way better' is incorrect; it should be 'are not always better' to include the verb and correct adverb. 'it has many cheaper products' should be 'there are many cheaper products' to correctly refer to plural products. 'It's very pro productivity' is unclear; 'They are very productive' is more appropriate. These corrections fix singular/plural issues and improve sentence clarity.