购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is quite natural and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid starting with just one word answers like 'Shopping definitely.' Instead, start with a full sentence to sound more fluent.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it allows me to update my wardrobe with clothes suitable for the current season. For instance, I prefer buying light and comfortable clothes during summer, whereas in winter, I opt for warmer outfits. Moreover, shopping helps me explore new styles and boosts my confidence.

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly by directly answering the question, then explaining your reason with linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

示例: No, I usually don't compare prices when I shop because I prefer buying trending clothes and treats like candy. Since clothes can be expensive, I focus more on the style and quality rather than the price comparison.

建议: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but the flow can be improved by using clearer linking words and correcting minor grammatical mistakes. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise within five sentences.

示例: Yes, I find it quite difficult to make choices when shopping because I want clothes that are both trendy and suitable for me. Sometimes, after shopping, I realize I missed better options, which confuses me. Therefore, I usually take my time to compare different styles before deciding.

建议: Your answer has some good points but contains grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid repetition. Also, be careful with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

示例: I believe that expensive products are generally better than cheaper ones because they tend to last longer and have a longer expiry date. On the other hand, cheaper products may not be as durable or reliable, so they might not be worth buying in the long run.

× No, I don't compare prices when I while I'm shopping because.

✓ No, I don't compare prices while I'm shopping because.

The phrase 'when I while I'm shopping' is incorrect due to the unnecessary use of both 'when' and 'while'. Only one is needed to indicate the time of the action. Removing 'when I' corrects the sentence structure.

× I give more preference to buy trending clothes and candy.

✓ I give more preference to buying trending clothes and candy.

The verb 'give preference to' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) rather than the base form of the verb. Hence, 'to buy' should be corrected to 'to buying'.

× Clothes are expensive so that's why I did not give reference to compare prices with shopkeepers.

✓ Clothes are expensive, so that's why I did not refer to comparing prices with shopkeepers.

The phrase 'give reference to compare prices' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'refer to comparing prices'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× Sometimes after I finish shopping, I return home, I realize there was better option I miss, which makes me feel a bit confused.

✓ Sometimes after I finish shopping and return home, I realize there was a better option I missed, which makes me feel a bit confused.

The word 'option' is singular and needs an article 'a'. Also, 'miss' should be in past tense 'missed' to match the past action. The sentence structure is improved by combining clauses properly.

× Sometimes after I finish shopping, I return home, I realize there was better option I miss, which makes me feel a bit confused.

✓ Sometimes after I finish shopping and return home, I realize there was a better option I missed, which makes me feel a bit confused.

The verb 'miss' should be in past tense 'missed' to correctly indicate a past action that happened after shopping.

× No doubt, expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

✓ No doubt, expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× If we buy expensive products, its expiry date are also long and it can we can use that product long time.

✓ If we buy expensive products, their expiry dates are also long and we can use those products for a long time.

The pronoun 'its' is singular but refers to plural 'products', so it should be 'their'. Also, 'expiry date' should be plural 'expiry dates' to match 'products'. The phrase 'it can we can use' is redundant and corrected to 'we can use'. Added 'for' before 'a long time' for correct expression.

× But cheaper ones are not a good one and we cannot use that product for a long time.

✓ But cheaper ones are not good and we cannot use those products for a long time.

The phrase 'not a good one' is incorrect because 'ones' is plural. It should be 'not good'. Also, 'that product' should be 'those products' to agree with plural 'cheaper ones'.