购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and improving grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about your shopping habits.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially when I go with my friend to the nearby mall. I usually buy clothes, shoes, and sometimes groceries or daily essentials.

建议: Improve clarity and grammar by structuring your answer with clear reasons and linking words. Be specific about when and why you compare prices.

示例: Yes, I often compare prices, especially for expensive items, because some smaller shops offer better deals than big malls. This helps me save money when buying in bulk.

建议: Focus on improving sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your difficulties and how you overcome them. Be specific about the items and your decision-making process.

示例: Yes, I sometimes find it hard to choose jeans or shoes because there are so many options. Therefore, I usually ask my sister for advice, and occasionally I help my friends with their choices too.

建议: Work on grammar and clarity. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and examples, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I think it depends on the product and the brand. For example, I prefer to buy organic products from trusted brands, but for other items, cheaper options can be just as good.

× Yes, I have a keen interest to shopping and I go with my friend for the shopping.

✓ Yes, I have a keen interest in shopping and I go with my friend for shopping.

The phrase 'keen interest' is followed by the preposition 'in' and the gerund form of the verb, so 'interest to shopping' should be 'interest in shopping'. Also, 'for the shopping' is unnecessary; 'for shopping' is correct.

× Most of the time I go in nearby mall and I like to buy my clothes, some pair of shoes and sometimes grocery and a daily basis regular things.

✓ Most of the time I go to a nearby mall and I like to buy clothes, some pairs of shoes, and sometimes groceries and daily basic regular things.

The correct preposition with 'go' for a place is 'to', not 'in'. Also, 'my clothes' is better as 'clothes' in this context. 'Some pair of shoes' should be 'some pairs of shoes' to agree in number. 'Grocery' should be plural 'groceries' when referring to items. 'A daily basis regular things' is incorrect; it should be 'daily basic regular things' or better phrased as 'daily essentials'.

× Yes, sometimes I need to compare the prices of some products which are too costly and because some shops provide the products on a reasonable price compared to the big malls.

✓ Yes, sometimes I need to compare the prices of some products which are too costly because some shops provide the products at a reasonable price compared to big malls.

The phrase 'on a reasonable price' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at a reasonable price'. Also, 'and because' is redundant; 'because' alone suffices.

× So I need to be buy for the one time and big amount.

✓ So I need to buy in one go and in large amounts.

The phrase 'need to be buy' is incorrect; it should be 'need to buy'. 'For the one time' is better expressed as 'in one go'. 'Big amount' should be 'large amounts' to correctly quantify.

× Yes, sometimes I face difficulty to choose the my Jean Pierre and sometimes shoes because they are the number of options available and I feel confused to choose a good one.

✓ Yes, sometimes I face difficulty choosing my jeans and sometimes shoes because there are a number of options available and I feel confused about choosing a good one.

The verb 'face difficulty' is followed by a gerund, so 'to choose' should be 'choosing'. 'The my Jean Pierre' is incorrect; it should be 'my jeans'. 'They are the number of options' should be 'there are a number of options'. 'Confused to choose' should be 'confused about choosing'.

× And I try to take advice from my sister. Sometimes I help for my friend.

✓ And I try to take advice from my sister. Sometimes I help my friend.

The phrase 'help for my friend' is incorrect; 'help' is a transitive verb and does not require 'for' before the object.

× It's depend on the products and the and also on the brand.

✓ It depends on the products and also on the brand.

The subject 'It' requires the verb in third person singular form 'depends', not 'depend'. Also, 'and the and' is redundant and should be simplified.

× Sometimes I need to be by the organic products which I need to be preferred by of brand.

✓ Sometimes I need to buy organic products which I prefer by brand.

The phrase 'need to be by the organic products' is incorrect; it should be 'need to buy organic products'. 'Preferred by of brand' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer by brand' or better 'prefer certain brands'.

× Sometimes I need to give reference to buy cheap cheaper ones which are I can easily buy.

✓ Sometimes I need to refer to buying cheaper ones which I can easily buy.

The phrase 'give reference to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'refer to buying'. 'Cheap cheaper ones' is redundant; 'cheaper ones' suffices. 'Which are I can easily buy' is ungrammatical; it should be 'which I can easily buy'.