购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih langsung dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan fokus pada topik utama.

示例: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially for baking tools and ingredients like flour, cheese, and chocolate. It helps me prepare for my baking projects.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat pengulangan serta kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menjawab dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda membandingkan harga.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices before shopping because it helps me find the best deals and save money.

建议: Jawaban Anda agak membingungkan dan ada kesalahan kata. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan proses Anda dalam membuat keputusan saat berbelanja.

示例: Sometimes, I find it difficult to choose products because I lack experience. Therefore, I usually research their prices and pros and cons before deciding.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang lengkap dan ada pengulangan kata. Cobalah untuk memberikan alasan yang lebih jelas dan lengkap dengan menggunakan kalimat yang terstruktur dan kata penghubung.

示例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. As a baker, I believe that using cheaper ingredients can still produce good results if you have the right techniques.

× I think that almost women in this world are like shopping.

✓ I think that almost all women in this world like shopping.

The phrase 'almost women' is incorrect because 'women' is plural and needs a quantifier like 'almost all' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'are like shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'like shopping' to express preference.

× I usually I shop about the tools to baking and ingredients like a flower, cheese, chocolate and et cetera and.

✓ I usually shop for baking tools and ingredients like flour, cheese, chocolate, and so on.

The phrase 'shop about the tools to baking' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' and 'baking' is a gerund here. Also, 'a flower' is a misspelling of 'flour'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs simplification.

× Yes, of course I compared price when I am shopping.

✓ Yes, of course I compare prices when I am shopping.

The verb 'compared' is past tense but the sentence context is present habitual action, so 'compare' in present tense is correct. Also, 'price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple prices are compared.

× Yes, of course I compared price when I am shopping.

✓ Yes, of course I compare prices when I am shopping.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because the action involves comparing multiple prices.

× I compared when I shop.

✓ I compare when I shop.

The verb 'compared' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'compare' is appropriate.

× I just search the price of the project before cutting the offline store so that I can compare the PRI what price are cheaper than to each other so that I can save my money and I can.

✓ I just search the price of the product before going to the offline store so that I can compare which prices are cheaper than others so that I can save my money.

The phrase 'cutting the offline store' is incorrect; it should be 'going to the offline store'. 'Project' is likely a typo for 'product'. 'PRI what price are cheaper than to each other' is incorrect and should be 'which prices are cheaper than others'.

× Sometimes it's just a bit difficult for me to make choices when I when I shop because I don't know the I don't have an experience about that product.

✓ Sometimes it's just a bit difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I don't have experience with that product.

The phrase 'have an experience about' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'have experience with'. Also, the repeated 'when I' is redundant.

× So that usually I just do research, mini research about that price, about their positive and negative so that I can make a pesticide.

✓ So usually I just do a little research about the price and the positives and negatives so that I can make a decision.

'So that' is incorrectly used at the beginning; 'So' or 'Therefore' is better. 'Mini research' is informal; 'a little research' is better. 'About their positive and negative' should be 'about the positives and negatives'. 'Make a pesticide' is incorrect; likely meant 'make a decision'.

× No, I no, I don't think that the expensive 1 is better than cheaper one.

✓ No, I don't think that the expensive one is better than the cheaper one.

The number '1' should be spelled out as 'one'. Also, 'cheaper one' needs the definite article 'the' before it to be grammatically correct.

× It's because I think that like for me I am a Baker so that it not always like that you can use a cheaper one to your project as long as you know how to make it like the technique so that the.

✓ It's because, for me, I am a baker, so it's not always like that; you can use a cheaper one for your project as long as you know the technique.

The sentence has multiple conjunction and structure errors. 'So that it not always like that' is incorrect; it should be 'so it's not always like that'. 'Use a cheaper one to your project' should be 'use a cheaper one for your project'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.