购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping in my free time because I like discovering new products. Also, I often go out with friends, which makes shopping a fun social activity and a great way to spend time together.

建议: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. Also, clarify your reasons with better vocabulary and sentence structure.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices using apps and websites because prices often vary between stores. Moreover, my parents taught me to do this to manage my money wisely.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct verb forms, and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to explain your reasoning logically.

示例: Yes, I find it hard to make choices when shopping because there are many options available. Therefore, I spend a lot of time comparing prices to avoid making the wrong decision.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons using appropriate vocabulary and linking words.

示例: To be honest, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. For example, the price often reflects the brand and materials used, so it's important to check the quality before deciding.

× Yes, I really enjoy shopping in my free time because I like to check out the new products and train.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy shopping in my free time because I like to check out the new products and try them.

The word 'train' is incorrectly used here; it should be replaced with a verb that fits the context, such as 'try'. 'Train' is a verb meaning to teach or practice, which does not fit the context of checking out new products.

× You often go out with friends and make it a social activity.

✓ I often go out with friends and make it a social activity.

The pronoun 'You' is incorrectly used here as the student is talking about their own habits. It should be 'I' to correctly refer to themselves.

× Yes I I always compare price for example in apps and website because always the price is different in different place.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices, for example in apps and websites, because the price is always different in different places.

The nouns 'price', 'app', 'website', and 'place' should be plural to match the context of multiple items and locations. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× My parents taught me to do it because I need to send money.

✓ My parents taught me to do it because I need to save money.

The phrase 'send money' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'save money' to express the idea of being careful with spending.

× Yes, I find it hard to make choice when I shopping because there are a lot of option so I don't worry about picking the wrong 1.

✓ Yes, I find it hard to make choices when I am shopping because there are a lot of options so I don't worry about picking the wrong one.

The nouns 'choice' and 'option' should be plural ('choices', 'options') to match the context. Also, 'I shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'I am shopping'. The numeral '1' should be replaced with the word 'one'.

× So that's why I spend a lot of time to figure out different price.

✓ So that's why I spend a lot of time figuring out different prices.

The phrase 'spend a lot of time to figure out' is incorrect; it should be 'spend a lot of time figuring out'. Also, 'price' should be plural as 'prices'.

× To be honest, I don't think that expensive products always is better than cheaper one.

✓ To be honest, I don't think that expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'products'; it should be 'are'. Also, 'one' should be plural 'ones' to match 'products'.

× For example, the price reflects the brand, the materials use it, so that's why it's necessary necessarily to check it.

✓ For example, the price reflects the brand and the materials used, so that's why it's necessary to check it.

The phrase 'the materials use it' is incorrect; it should be 'the materials used'. Also, 'necessary necessarily' is redundant; only 'necessary' is needed.