购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is natural and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors such as 'on trend' which should be 'on-trend'.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping in my free time because I like to check out the new on-trend products. Moreover, I often go out with friends and make it a social activity, so it is a great way to spend more time together.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'compare price' should be 'compare prices', and 'on apps and website' should be 'on apps and websites'. Also, try to use linking words to improve flow.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices, especially online on apps and websites, because sometimes the prices are different. Furthermore, my parents taught me to do this to save money.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are minor errors such as 'make choice' which should be 'make choices' and 'comparing to price' which should be 'comparing prices'. Using more precise vocabulary and linking words would enhance your response.

示例: Yes, I often find it hard to make choices when I shop because there are so many options. Therefore, I prefer to spend a lot of time comparing prices and reading reviews to avoid picking the wrong one.

建议: Your answer is thoughtful but contains some grammatical mistakes such as 'doesn't necessarily means' which should be 'doesn't necessarily mean'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and provide a clearer explanation.

示例: To be honest, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes the price reflects the brand or the material used. Therefore, the price doesn't necessarily mean the quality is superior.

× Yes, I always compare price especially online on apps and website because sometimes the price are different.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices especially online on apps and websites because sometimes the prices are different.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items or options. Similarly, 'website' should be plural 'websites' to match the context of multiple platforms. Also, 'price are' is incorrect; it should be 'prices are' to agree in number with the plural subject.

× Additionally, my parents taught me to do it this to save money.

✓ Additionally, my parents taught me to do this to save money.

The phrase 'do it this' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'do this' without 'it' because 'this' already functions as a pronoun referring to the action. Including both 'it' and 'this' is redundant and ungrammatical.

× Yes, I often find it hard to make choice when I shop.

✓ Yes, I often find it hard to make choices when I shop.

The word 'choice' should be plural 'choices' because the context implies multiple options to choose from. Using the singular form here is incorrect when referring to more than one option.

× However, I prefer to spend a lot of time comparing to price and reading reviews.

✓ However, I prefer to spend a lot of time comparing prices and reading reviews.

The phrase 'comparing to price' is incorrect. It should be 'comparing prices' because 'compare' is followed directly by the plural noun without 'to'. Also, 'price' should be plural to indicate multiple items' prices.

× So in this case that doesn't necessarily means the quality is superior.

✓ So in this case that doesn't necessarily mean the quality is superior.

The verb 'means' is incorrectly used with 'doesn't'. After 'doesn't', the base form of the verb 'mean' should be used, not 'means'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to auxiliary verbs and verb forms.