购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally good but try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and reduce redundancy such as repeating 'fresh'. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and clear. For example, instead of saying 'in any small way as possible as I can', you can say 'in any small way I can'.

示例: Yes, I enjoy grocery shopping because I can select fresh produce and the best ingredients for my family. It gives me a sense of fulfillment to care for their needs, even in small ways.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some repetition like 'different different stores' and could be more fluent. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: Yes, I usually compare prices because some shopkeepers might overcharge. Therefore, as a consumer, it is important to check prices at different stores before buying.

建议: Your answer is clear and well-structured but could be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas and by avoiding redundancy such as 'pre predetermined'. Also, try to vary your sentence structures for better fluency.

示例: I don't find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I usually have a predetermined list. Moreover, I rarely buy items that are not on the list, so shopping is straightforward for me.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors such as 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper products can be of better quality. However, if you pay a high price for something like facial cream, it usually contains rare ingredients that justify the cost.

× I don't think I find it difficult making choices whenever I go shopping.

✓ I don't think I find it difficult to make choices whenever I go shopping.

The verb 'find' is followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making'. Using 'to make' is grammatically correct here because 'find' can be followed by an object plus infinitive to express perception or opinion.

× So as a consumer it is very important that I compare prices with a different different stores whenever I go shopping.

✓ So as a consumer it is very important that I compare prices with different stores whenever I go shopping.

The phrase 'a different different stores' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'stores' is plural. Removing 'a' and the repeated 'different' corrects the plural agreement.

× I don't think expensive products has ever been better than the cheaper ones.

✓ I don't think expensive products have ever been better than the cheaper ones.

The subject 'products' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number.

× But if you're pre paying a very highly price for something for example a facial cream, then there must be some ingredients which is very rare and.

✓ But if you're prepaying a very high price for something, for example a facial cream, then there must be some ingredients which are very rare.

The phrase 'pre paying' should be one word 'prepaying'. 'Highly price' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'high price'. Also, 'ingredients which is' should be 'ingredients which are' to agree in number. Added commas for clarity.