购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct grammatical errors such as 'It's make' to 'It makes'. Also, use more precise vocabulary and slightly expand your answer with linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I like shopping because it's enjoyable to discover new items and try them out. Moreover, I often go with my friends or family, which makes it a social event. Additionally, it's exciting to find good deals, so I always look forward to shopping trips.

建议: Focus on correcting grammar mistakes such as 'price' to 'prices' and 'I don't have a time' to 'I don't have time'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer explanations.

示例: No, I don't compare prices because I don't have much time. Instead, I usually shop at the same store where I know the prices are fair. Also, I trust the brands I buy, so I feel confident in my choices.

建议: Improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, 'I have list' should be 'I have a list'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add more detail to enrich your response.

示例: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I know exactly what I want. Therefore, I always make a list beforehand, and I buy only the items on it.

建议: Work on grammar and clarity. For example, 'product are' should be 'products are', and the sentence structure needs improvement. Also, clarify your opinion with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I think expensive products are usually better, but sometimes people just pay for the brand name. In fact, some cheaper products offer good quality and are worth considering.

× It's make uh, it's a social event.

✓ It makes, uh, it's a social event.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. 'Make' is the base form and does not agree with the singular subject.

× No, I don't compare price because I don't have a time.

✓ No, I don't compare prices because I don't have time.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'a time' is incorrect; 'time' is an uncountable noun here and should not have an article.

× I prepare to solve at the same store where I know the price are fair.

✓ I prefer to shop at the same store where I know the prices are fair.

The verb 'prepare' is incorrect in this context; 'prefer' fits better. Also, 'price' should be plural 'prices' to agree with 'are'.

× I trust the brands I buy.

✓ I trust the brands I buy.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× So I have list and I what I want I buy.

✓ So I have a list, and I buy what I want.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'list' and has incorrect word order. The corrected sentence has proper article usage and correct word order for clarity.

× I think expensive product are always better, sometime they are just paying for brands name and they are only cheaper product that's worth just visible.

✓ I think expensive products are always better, but sometimes they are just paying for the brand name, and there are only cheaper products that are worth just being visible.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to agree with 'are'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Brands name' should be 'brand name'. 'They are only cheaper product' should be 'there are only cheaper products'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.