购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I'm running into shopping' and repeated phrases. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example using linking words.

示例: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially when I feel stressed. Visiting shopping malls and seeing a variety of products gives me comfort and motivates me to work harder.

建议: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrasing, such as 'it's it's costly' and 'which could save your which saves your money'. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use correct grammar.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because some items can be expensive. By comparing, I can find similar products at lower prices, which helps me save money.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating phrases like 'whether I should, whether I need to buy, I want to buy'. Use linking words to explain why it is difficult to make choices and provide specific examples.

示例: Yes, it can be difficult to make choices because there are many attractive items, such as stylish haircuts and stuffed toys. Sometimes, I am unsure whether I really need to buy them or if I just want them.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as 'they always visit' and 'some product your restaurant'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting example, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure coherence.

示例: Not necessarily. For example, there is a small food shop near our university where the prices are low, but the food tastes excellent. On the other hand, some expensive restaurants serve food that is not as good.

× Yes, I'm running into shopping, especially when I feel stressed.

✓ Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially when I feel stressed.

The phrase 'running into shopping' is incorrect. The verb 'run into' means to meet unexpectedly, which does not fit here. The correct expression is 'enjoy shopping' or 'like shopping'. Using the gerund 'shopping' as a noun is appropriate after 'enjoy'.

× You know, going to going to shop mall to see so many various goods can give me a sense of comfort.

✓ You know, going to the shopping mall to see many different goods can give me a sense of comfort.

The phrase 'going to going to shop mall' is repetitive and incorrect. The correct structure is 'going to the shopping mall'. Also, 'so many various goods' is awkward; 'many different goods' is more natural. The sentence structure needed correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× You know, going to going to shop mall to see so many various goods can give me a sense of comfort.

✓ You know, going to the shopping mall to see many different goods can give me a sense of comfort.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'shopping mall' because it refers to a specific place. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× When I'm shopping, I definitely will compare price because it's it's costly because you could get another good at a lower price, which could save your which saves your money and you know, some goods.

✓ When I'm shopping, I definitely compare prices because it's costly; you could get another good at a lower price, which saves your money, and you know, some goods.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' when talking about comparing multiple items. Also, 'definitely will compare' is better as 'definitely compare' for naturalness. The phrase 'which could save your which saves your money' is redundant and confusing; 'which saves your money' is correct.

× When I'm shopping, I definitely will compare price because it's it's costly because you could get another good at a lower price, which could save your which saves your money and you know, some goods.

✓ When I'm shopping, I definitely compare prices because it's costly; you could get another good at a lower price, which saves your money, and you know, some goods.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because the speaker is comparing multiple prices. Singular 'price' is incorrect in this context.

× Yes, certainly there's various beautiful things I want to buy, like beautiful haircuts and stuffed toys.

✓ Yes, certainly there are various beautiful things I want to buy, like beautiful haircuts and stuffed toys.

The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular. Since 'various beautiful things' is plural, the correct form is 'there are'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× You know, sometimes I just don't know whether I should, whether I need to buy, I want to buy.

✓ You know, sometimes I just don't know whether I should buy or whether I need to buy what I want.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The pronouns and clauses are not properly connected. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× Not really. For example they always visit some small food shop at our university, which price the price there is cheap but the food tastes great.

✓ Not really. For example, they always visit a small food shop at our university, where the prices are cheap but the food tastes great.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and has awkward phrasing. 'Which price the price there is cheap' is incorrect; it should be 'where the prices are cheap'. Also, 'some small food shop' is better as 'a small food shop'.

× Not really. For example they always visit some small food shop at our university, which price the price there is cheap but the food tastes great.

✓ Not really. For example, they always visit a small food shop at our university, where the prices are cheap but the food tastes great.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items or general pricing. Singular 'price' is incorrect here.

× But if you go to some product your restaurant it tastes awful.

✓ But if you go to some fancy restaurant, the food tastes awful.

The phrase 'some product your restaurant' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or misphrasing. The correction assumes the intended meaning is 'some fancy restaurant'. Also, the sentence needed proper structure and clarity.

× So things don't.

✓ So, things don't always taste better because they are expensive.

The sentence 'So things don't.' is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought to match the context of the question about expensive products not always being better.