购物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'during shopping I can see many kinds of groceries' which is a bit awkward. Also, improve grammar by saying 'I like cooking very much' instead of 'I like cook very much'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially because I love cooking. I often visit the vegetable section to find fresh vegetables and meats for my recipes.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'price of a product is an important part to judge' should be 'price is an important factor in judging'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

示例: Yes, I always compare prices because I believe price is an important factor in judging a product's quality. Therefore, I try to choose the best quality items at the lowest price.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. For example, 'Making choice for me is quite easy' should be 'Making choices is quite easy for me'. Also, 'That would not always be conflicts in my mind' is unclear; you could say 'I rarely have conflicts in my mind'. Try to use linking words to improve flow.

示例: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices because I usually select the best option. I rarely have any conflicts in my mind since I know what suits me.

建议: Your answer conveys your opinion but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Expensive products are always unaffordable' is a bit redundant; you could say 'Expensive products are often unaffordable'. Also, 'I will choose the high quality with cheaper' is unclear; better to say 'I prefer to choose high-quality products at a lower price'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Often, expensive items are unaffordable, and cheaper products can also be of good quality. Therefore, I prefer to choose high-quality products at a reasonable price.

× I'm a great fan of shopping because during shopping I can see many kinds of groceries.

✓ I'm a great fan of shopping because during shopping I can see many kinds of grocery items.

The word 'groceries' is typically used as a plural noun referring to food and other items bought from a store, but 'kinds of groceries' is awkward. It is better to say 'kinds of grocery items' to specify different types of products. This improves clarity and correctness.

× I like cook very much, so I would always go to the vegetable zone to search some fresh vegetables and meats for my cooking recipes.

✓ I like cooking very much, so I always go to the vegetable zone to look for some fresh vegetables and meats for my cooking recipes.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'cooking' rather than the base verb 'cook'. Also, 'would always go' is better as 'always go' to express habitual action. 'Search some fresh vegetables and meats' is unnatural; 'look for' is more appropriate when seeking items.

× Making choice for me is quite easy, since I would choose the best one.

✓ Making choices for me is quite easy, since I would choose the best one.

The noun 'choice' should be plural 'choices' when referring to the act of selecting among multiple options. This aligns with the context of making decisions during shopping.

× That would not always be conflicts in my mind, since I know which is suitable for me.

✓ There would not always be conflicts in my mind, since I know what is suitable for me.

The original sentence lacks the existential 'there' needed for 'there be' construction. Also, 'conflicts' is plural and requires 'be' verb. 'Which is suitable' is better replaced with 'what is suitable' to refer to the suitable option in general.

× No, I don't. Expensive products are always unaffordable and cheaper ones may have good quality.

✓ No, I don't. Expensive products are not always unaffordable, and cheaper ones may have good quality.

The original sentence incorrectly generalises that expensive products are always unaffordable, which contradicts the intended meaning. Adding 'not' clarifies the negation. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence flow.

× Price is not the only key to judge whether a product is good or bad and I will choose the high quality with cheaper.

✓ Price is not the only key to judge whether a product is good or bad, and I will choose high quality at a lower price.

The phrase 'the high quality with cheaper' is incorrect. 'High quality' is uncountable and does not take 'the' here. 'Cheaper' should be replaced with 'a lower price' or 'cheaper price' for clarity. Also, a comma before 'and' is needed to separate clauses.