工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundancy.

範例: I am currently working in a restaurant where I collaborate closely with my team members. Additionally, I interact with new customers daily, which helps me develop valuable skills such as customer service and teamwork.

建議: Provide a clear and complete answer with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about your tasks and avoid repetition.

範例: I work in a fast-paced restaurant where I take orders, handle customer complaints, and interact with customers daily. This environment requires me to stay attentive and efficient.

建議: Improve sentence clarity and coherence by using linking words and avoiding filler sounds. Provide specific reasons why it is a good place to work and explain your feelings clearly.

範例: Yes, it is a very good place to work because I learn many new things. Although some customers have negative attitudes, others are positive, which makes my job both challenging and enjoyable.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by reducing filler words and combining sentences with linking words. Be specific about how your team supports you to strengthen your response.

範例: Yes, I like working at my restaurant because my team members have a positive attitude and always cooperate with me. Whenever I face problems with orders or customers, they help me find solutions.

建議: Clarify your future plans with complete sentences and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details about your goals.

範例: Currently, I enjoy working in the restaurant industry, and in the future, I plan to open my own restaurant. I aim to hire cooperative, skilled, and supportive staff to ensure success.

× Currently, I'm working in the restaurant where I have to work with my team members and cooperate with them.

✓ Currently, I work in a restaurant where I have to work with my team members and cooperate with them.

The present continuous tense 'I'm working' suggests a temporary action, but since this is a regular job, the simple present 'I work' is more appropriate to describe habitual actions.

× And also I'm interacting with the new customers in my daily routine.

✓ I also interact with new customers in my daily routine.

For habitual actions, the simple present tense 'I interact' is preferred over the present continuous 'I'm interacting'.

× I'm working in fast-paced restaurant where I have to deal with customers at my daily routine and I'm also taking the orders and dealing with their complaints in my daily basis and I also have some.

✓ I'm working in a fast-paced restaurant where I have to deal with customers in my daily routine, and I also take orders and deal with their complaints on a daily basis.

The noun 'restaurant' requires the article 'a' as it is singular and countable. Also, 'at my daily routine' and 'in my daily basis' are incorrect prepositional phrases; the correct phrases are 'in my daily routine' and 'on a daily basis'. The verb tenses are adjusted to simple present to indicate habitual actions.

× Yes, according to it is very nice place to work because here I can learn too many things.

✓ Yes, I think it is a very nice place to work because here I can learn many things.

The phrase 'according to it' is incorrect here; 'I think' or 'in my opinion' is appropriate. Also, 'too many things' implies an excessive amount, while 'many things' is more suitable in this context.

× It is challenging for me to deal uh with different kind of customers because some customers have negative attitude uh as uh, on the other side, some have positive attitude, but I like to work with.

✓ It is challenging for me to deal with different kinds of customers because some customers have a negative attitude, while others have a positive attitude, but I like working with them.

The phrase 'different kind of customers' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of customers'. 'Negative attitude' and 'positive attitude' require the article 'a'. The phrase 'on the other side' is better replaced with 'while others'. Also, 'I like to work with' is incomplete; it should be 'I like working with them'.

× Yes. I like that place where I am working because the other team members have positive attitude.

✓ Yes. I like the place where I work because the other team members have a positive attitude.

The phrase 'that place where I am working' is better expressed as 'the place where I work' for clarity and naturalness. Also, 'positive attitude' requires the article 'a'.

× They always cooperate with me uh, whenever I face any problem uh, regarding any order or related to any customer, they help me uh, and give me the solution.

✓ They always cooperate with me whenever I face any problem regarding an order or related to a customer; they help me and give me solutions.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'the solution' should be plural 'solutions' as problems can have multiple solutions. Also, 'any order' and 'any customer' are better expressed as 'an order' and 'a customer' in this context.

× As in currently I'm working in the restaurant and I'm really like to do this job.

✓ Currently, I am working in the restaurant and I really like doing this job.

The phrase 'I'm really like to do this job' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like doing this job'. The present continuous 'I'm working' is acceptable here as it refers to the current situation.

× So according to my current job I wanted to open my own restaurant in the future.

✓ So according to my current job, I want to open my own restaurant in the future.

The verb 'wanted' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a future plan, so the present tense 'want' is appropriate.

× And I will hire uh the cooperative and best and supportive.

✓ And I will hire cooperative, best, and supportive staff.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a noun after the adjectives. Adding 'staff' clarifies the meaning. Also, the adjectives should be in a list separated by commas.