工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, avoid filler words like 'umm' and clarify your responsibilities clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I'm currently working as a project manager for hydrogen charger production. My main responsibilities include coordinating with my teammates and holding meetings with clients to discuss project progress.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same information. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I work at a large company located in northern Taiwan that produces electric chargers.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

範例: Yes, definitely. It is an innovative environment where there are many changes due to new products, so people can learn a lot.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, definitely. My teammates and manager are very friendly and always willing to support each other. When facing challenges, they help immediately, which creates a positive work environment.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your plans clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid filler words and be specific about your goals.

範例: Right now, I am planning to apply for a master's degree in business analytics. After that, I hope to work in the field of business analytics.

× I'm currently working as a project manager for producing hydrogen charger and my responsibility mainly in involves UMM coordinate with my teammates and hold meetings with clients to discuss.

✓ I'm currently working as a project manager producing hydrogen chargers, and my responsibilities mainly involve coordinating with my teammates and holding meetings with clients to discuss.

The phrase 'for producing' is incorrect; 'producing' should be used directly as a verb complement without 'for'. 'Hydrogen charger' should be pluralized to 'hydrogen chargers' to match the context. 'My responsibility mainly in involves UMM coordinate' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'my responsibilities mainly involve coordinating' to correctly use the verb + -ing form after 'involve'. Also, 'coordinate' and 'hold' should be in gerund form 'coordinating' and 'holding' to match the verb pattern after 'involve'.

× I work at a big company which produced the electric charger and I work on this company located in the north of Taiwan.

✓ I work at a big company which produces electric chargers, and this company is located in the north of Taiwan.

The verb 'produced' is past tense but the sentence describes a current fact, so it should be present tense 'produces'. 'Electric charger' should be pluralized to 'electric chargers' to match the context. 'I work on this company located' is incorrect; it should be 'this company is located' to correctly describe the company's location.

× Yes, definitely cause umm, it is uh, innovation feared for me, umm, there is a lot of change when you umm, dealing with the innovation products and I think people can learned lots of things.

✓ Yes, definitely, because it is innovative for me. There are a lot of changes when you deal with innovative products, and I think people can learn lots of things.

'Cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. 'Innovation feared' is incorrect; the adjective 'innovative' should be used. 'There is a lot of change' should be plural 'There are a lot of changes' to match plural context. 'When you umm, dealing' should be 'when you deal' to use the correct verb form. 'People can learned' should be 'people can learn' because 'can' is followed by the base verb form.

× Yes, definitely. My teammates and my manager are extremely friendly and always willing to support each other. When you face the issue or the challenge, they will help you at the first time and this makes the work environment.

✓ Yes, definitely. My teammates and my manager are extremely friendly and always willing to support each other. When you face an issue or a challenge, they will help you immediately, and this creates a good work environment.

'The issue or the challenge' is too specific; 'an issue or a challenge' is more appropriate here. 'At the first time' is incorrect; 'immediately' or 'right away' is better. 'This makes the work environment' is incomplete; it should be 'this creates a good work environment' to express the intended meaning.

× Umm, right now I'm going to apply the masters degrees for business analyst, so I'm planning to work the fee in the field related to business analytics.

✓ Umm, right now I'm going to apply for a master's degree in business analysis, so I'm planning to work in the field related to business analytics.

'Apply the masters degrees' is incorrect; it should be 'apply for a master's degree'. 'Business analyst' should be 'business analysis' to refer to the field of study. 'Work the fee' is incorrect; it should be 'work in the field'. These corrections fix modal verb usage and preposition errors.