工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat long and a bit repetitive. Try to answer more directly and naturally by stating your current status first, then briefly adding relevant details. Avoid repeating the question and unnecessary filler words.

範例: I have recently completed my MBA, and I have been working as an English tutor for the past 11 years. I teach students privately, usually from 11:00 to 12:00.

建議: Your answer is clear but includes many fillers and some awkward phrasing. Try to be more concise and fluent, and avoid repeating information already given. Use linking words to make your answer smoother.

範例: I work as a home tutor, teaching English to students at their homes rather than in a coaching center or institution.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and grammatically incorrect in places. Try to organize your thoughts logically using linking words and be more specific. Also, avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure.

範例: Yes, I love working as a home tutor because I can focus on each student's unique learning needs. Many students find it hard to understand lessons in large coaching centers, so private tutoring at home is more effective for them.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using correct grammar and linking words. Explain why you like your workplace with specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I enjoy my work because I get to travel to different places, which keeps me motivated. Teaching is also very rewarding and enjoyable for me.

建議: Your answer conveys your goals but is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words. Try to state your future plans clearly and support them with reasons, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I have been teaching for 11 years, and my goal is to become a university professor. I want to educate students not only academically but also to help them grow as responsible individuals, which will benefit the country in the long run.

× Actually I've recently completed my MBA graduation and I have been working last 11 years, 11 years as a teaching profession.

✓ Actually, I've recently completed my MBA graduation and I have been working for the last 11 years, 11 years as a teaching professional.

The phrase 'working last 11 years' is missing the preposition 'for' which is necessary to indicate the duration of time. Also, 'teaching profession' should be 'teaching professional' to correctly describe the person's role.

× I'm actually a teacher, I English tutor.

✓ I'm actually a teacher, an English tutor.

The sentence is missing the article 'an' before 'English tutor' which is necessary because 'English tutor' is a singular countable noun starting with a vowel sound.

× I'm teaching student class 11:00 to 12:00.

✓ I'm teaching students from 11:00 to 12:00.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context, and the preposition 'from' is needed to indicate the time range.

× Actually, I am teaching students for, for their homes, Uh, so I'm a home tutor.

✓ Actually, I am teaching students at their homes, so I'm a home tutor.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate the location where teaching happens.

× Every student has their special aspects or understanding capability.

✓ Every student has his or her special aspects or understanding capability.

The pronoun 'their' is plural, but 'every student' is singular, so 'his or her' should be used for agreement.

× So maximum student does not understand in coaching or institution because there are lots of student so they refer a private teacher home tutor.

✓ So most students do not understand in coaching or institutions because there are lots of students, so they refer to a private teacher or home tutor.

The singular 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'most' and 'lots of'. Also, 'institution' should be plural 'institutions' to match 'lots of'. The verb 'does' should be 'do' to agree with plural subject 'students'. Added 'to' after 'refer' for correct usage.

× I have 7 to 8 two showns.

✓ I have moved to 7 or 8 towns.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Showns' is incorrect; likely meant 'towns'. Also, 'have' should be 'have moved to' to express changing places. '7 to 8 two' is redundant; '7 or 8' is correct.

× So I love it because travelling is kind of give me enthusiasm to do it and it is pleasurable to teach.

✓ So I love it because travelling kind of gives me enthusiasm to do it and it is pleasurable to teach.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'travelling'. Also, 'kind of' is better placed before the verb 'gives'.

× As I have been teaching, uh, for the last 11 years, so I want to be a teacher, uh, professor from a university.

✓ As I have been teaching for the last 11 years, I want to be a university professor.

The phrase 'professor from a university' is awkward; 'university professor' is the correct form. Also, 'so' is unnecessary after 'years' in this context.

× So that is my goal and I want to educate students to become a human being and uh, the country will go for long run.

✓ So that is my goal, and I want to educate students to become good human beings so that the country will progress in the long run.

The phrase 'to become a human being' is incorrect because students are already human beings; it should be 'good human beings'. 'The country will go for long run' is awkward; 'the country will progress in the long run' is clearer. Added conjunctions and commas for better sentence flow.