工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your answer more concise and natural. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I am a university student studying business administration, which I find interesting because it covers marketing and management.

建議: Avoid filler words and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide specific details about your job.

範例: Currently, I have a part-time job that helps me improve my finances and also increases my business knowledge.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific examples of what makes the place good.

範例: Absolutely, it is a great place to work because many experienced managers are available, and they provide solutions and guidance for future work.

建議: Make your sentences clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why the place is useful for your future business.

範例: I like the place where I work because I want to become a businessman. Gaining experience here is useful for my future business plans.

建議: Use correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to explain how your current work relates to your future plans.

範例: My future work plan is to complete my current job fully because it increases my business knowledge, which will help me succeed in my future business.

× It's interesting because I learn about marketing and management.

✓ It's interesting because I am learning about marketing and management.

The sentence describes an ongoing action, so the present continuous tense ('am learning') is appropriate instead of the simple present ('learn'). This shows the action is happening now.

× Currently I do a part time job because uh it help me my financial improvement and.

✓ Currently I do a part-time job because it helps me improve my financial situation.

The verb 'help' needs to be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'improve my financial situation' is a clearer expression.

× It in it will be increasing my business knowledge.

✓ It will also increase my business knowledge.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper structure and tense to express future benefit clearly.

× there are many experienced manager available here

✓ there are many experienced managers available here

The noun 'manager' should be plural 'managers' to agree with 'many', which indicates plural.

× they give us every solution and how to work in future.

✓ they give us every solution and teach us how to work in the future.

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article 'the'. Also, 'how to work' needs a verb like 'teach us' to be grammatically correct.

× If I don't experience in my work, I couldn't go for my business.

✓ If I don't gain experience in my work, I couldn't go into my business.

The verb 'experience' needs to be used as 'gain experience'. Also, 'go for my business' is better expressed as 'go into my business'.

× If I don't experience in my work, I couldn't go for my business.

✓ If I don't gain experience in my work, I can't go into my business.

The modal verb 'couldn't' is incorrect here because the condition is present/future; 'can't' is appropriate for present/future possibility.

× My future work plan is full complete my now work site because it's increased my business knowledge and it could be bright for my future business.

✓ My future work plan is to fully complete my current work tasks because it increases my business knowledge and could brighten my future business.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'full complete' should be 'fully complete'; 'now work site' is unclear, better as 'current work tasks'; 'it's increased' should be 'it increases' to match present tense; 'could be bright' should be 'could brighten' to use correct verb form.