工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用正确的时态和表达方式。

範例: I have been waiting for over five years, but currently I am taking a break and planning to pursue PhD studies.

建議: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够清晰，缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题，使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明工作内容。

範例: I am not working now, but previously I worked in a small business in Shanghai where I applied computer vision algorithms for reward systems.

建議: 时态使用不当，表达重复且不够具体。建议使用过去时态，避免重复，并具体说明学到了什么。

範例: Yes, definitely. In my previous job, I learned a lot from my colleagues and projects, which helped me improve my professional skills and gain valuable experience.

建議: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的语法。

範例: Yes, I liked the place where I worked because it provided valuable experience and helped me develop my professional skills.

建議: 句子结构混乱，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接表达未来计划，并注意语法正确。

範例: In the future, I want to start my own business where I can do what I truly enjoy and keep all the profits.

× Well actually I have waiting for over 5 years, but currently I have a break and I'm planning to plan for PhD studies.

✓ Well actually I have been waiting for over 5 years, but currently I have a break and I'm planning to plan for PhD studies.

句中“have waiting”缺少助动词“been”，正确的现在完成进行时结构是“have been + 动词-ing”。建议使用“have been waiting”表示动作从过去持续到现在。

× Where do you work?>

✓ Where do you work?

句末多了一个“>”符号，属于句子结构错误，应删除该符号使句子正确。

× And actually I'm not working now, but in my previous work I was working in Shanghai and in a small business I was applying CV algorithms to reward.

✓ Actually, I'm not working now, but in my previous job I worked in Shanghai, and in a small business I applied CV algorithms to reward.

句子中“in my previous work”应为“in my previous job”，且时态应统一为过去时，动词“was working”和“was applying”改为“worked”和“applied”。此外，句首“And”不宜使用，改为“Actually”。

× Yes, definitely. In my previous job, I can learn a lot from my colleague and the projects.

✓ Yes, definitely. In my previous job, I could learn a lot from my colleagues and the projects.

句中“can learn”时态不符，应使用过去时“could learn”，且“colleague”应为复数“colleagues”，主谓一致。

× For example, I can improve my experience and professional skills.

✓ For example, I improved my experience and professional skills.

时态应与前句保持一致，使用过去时“improved”。“experience”通常不可数，表达“积累经验”时用“improved my experience”可接受。

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Did you like the place where you worked?

根据上下文，询问过去的工作地点感受，时态应为过去时，使用“Did you like”而非“Would you like”。

× Yes, definitely it's a good place for me because I can learn a lot from my work, you know, a valuable experience and also the professional skills which help me growth in my work pace.

✓ Yes, definitely it's a good place for me because I can learn a lot from my work, you know, valuable experience and also professional skills which help me grow in my work pace.

“help me growth”中“growth”应为动词“grow”。“a valuable experience”改为“valuable experience”更自然。

× You know, actually and in my future I want to start my own business where I can, doing what I'm truly enjoy also all efforts and profits and totally belongs to me.

✓ You know, actually in the future I want to start my own business where I can do what I truly enjoy, and all efforts and profits totally belong to me.

句中“and in my future”结构混乱，应改为“in the future”。“doing what I'm truly enjoy”应为“do what I truly enjoy”。“belongs”主语为复数“efforts and profits”，应改为“belong”。