工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“None of this”应改为“I am neither working nor studying currently”。此外，回答可以更简洁且逻辑清晰，避免重复表达。

範例: I have just graduated from university with a degree in social work, and I am currently looking for a job. I chose this field because I am passionate about helping people, and I am excited to start my career.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，应注意句子结构完整和时态一致。可以更清楚地说明过去的工作经历和地点。

範例: I don't have a job at the moment, but I used to work as a trade coordinator for a company located in an industrial area.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不完整的问题，应避免重复并补充更具体的细节，使回答更丰富。

範例: Yes, it was a good place to work because my coworkers were friendly, my supervisor was very supportive, and the salary was reasonable.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇和口语化填充词，应避免这些并使用更准确的词汇，如“staff”而非“stuff”，同时句子应更流畅。

範例: Yes, I liked the place because the staff were friendly and the location was convenient, being close to my home.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，应简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并清晰表达职业规划。

範例: Since I have just graduated with a degree in social work, I plan to find a job in this field to start my career.

× I am passionate in helping people.

✓ I am passionate about helping people.

动词 passionate 后应接介词 about，而不是 in。正确的搭配是 passionate about，表示对某事充满热情。

× I currently do not have a job but I used to work as a trade coordinator where I the the company I work is in industrial area.

✓ I currently do not have a job, but I used to work as a trade coordinator where the company I worked for is in an industrial area.

句子结构混乱，缺少介词和冠词，且时态不一致。应补充介词 for 表示工作单位，冠词 an 修饰 industrial area，且过去工作应使用过去时 worked。

× where I the the company I work is in industrial area.

✓ where the company I work for is in an industrial area.

缺少定冠词 the 和不定冠词 an，industrial area 前应加 an，表示泛指一个工业区。

× Also my supervisor is very supportive and the salary salary is also. OK.

✓ Also, my supervisor is very supportive and the salary is also OK.

重复单词 salary，且句子结构不完整，应删除重复词并补全句子。

× Yes, I like it because just as I mentioned, the, the, the, the stuff, the people there are good and the location is also not very far from my home.

✓ Yes, I like it because, just as I mentioned, the staff, the people there are good and the location is also not very far from my home.

单词 stuff 用错，应为 staff（员工）。多次重复 the 是口语中的停顿，应删除。

× I want to find a job related to social work since I just I have just graduated from social work degree and I want to switch my career so I want to find a position in social work.

✓ I want to find a job related to social work since I have just graduated with a degree in social work, and I want to switch my career, so I want to find a position in social work.

句子中有重复的词汇（just），缺少介词 with 修饰 degree，且句子连接不流畅，应调整句子结构使其更通顺。