工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答清晰直接，但可提高流利度與語法正確性，並用一兩句補充具體細節以顯示職責範圍。注意避免冗長片語並修正小語法錯誤。建議練習用連接詞（for example, such as, and）把要點串接起來，並將句子控制在5句以內。

範例: I work as a project manager for an audio-speaker project. I plan the production schedule and monitor progress to ensure we meet deadlines. For example, I coordinate between design and manufacturing teams to resolve delays, and I prepare weekly reports to track milestones.

建議: 回答有信息但時態錯誤（應用現在時），且句子有小語法與詞彙用法問題。可更自然地用一到兩個複句說明公司性質與自己職責，並避免拼寫或搭配錯誤（e.g. "loudspeakers" 一詞連寫）。

範例: I work for a technology company called Handsome that specializes in audio products, mainly loudspeakers. In the product team, I help with quality testing and contribute to design improvements based on user feedback.

建議: 回答簡短但有語言錯誤和不自然表達（例如“overseas desire”錯誤搭配，重複與冗詞）。應用更準確的詞彙（designed by an overseas design firm），並用一兩個具體細節支持觀點，如設施或同事氛圍。

範例: Yes, it is. The office was designed by an overseas design firm, so it has modern interiors and comfortable workspaces. The friendly colleagues and relaxed atmosphere make it a cozy place to work.

建議: 回答內容重複並包含多處錯誤（重複詞、時態與詞彙錯誤如“desire/Friday”）。應避免重覆之前說法，改用新細節支持意見，如具體設施、工作流程或同事互動，並注意語法（e.g. "productive" 前需副詞）。

範例: Yes, I do. The office has modern, comfortable lighting and large windows that let in a lot of natural light, which makes it very welcoming. The relaxed atmosphere and supportive team help me stay focused and productive.

建議: 回答有清晰目標但語言表達與用詞不準確（例如“landing ship course”不合語境，時態與冠詞使用需改進）。應具體說明要提升的技能與計劃（例如領導力、戰略規劃、項目管理課程），並用連接詞讓句子更流暢。

範例: Currently I'm a manager in the settlement department, and in five years I hope to be promoted to director. To achieve this, I plan to improve my management skills by taking leadership and strategic planning courses and by leading more cross-department projects to gain broader experience.

× I worked as a technology company called Handsome.

✓ I work at a technology company called Handsome.

原句使用了过去式 "worked"，而根据上下文考官问的是“Where do you work?”，说明说话者现在仍在该公司工作，应使用一般现在时。另有介词错误（使用了“as”），表示就职于某公司应使用介词“at”。建议：当描述现在的工作或常态时使用一般现在时（I work at ...）。

× It's specialized in making audio products, mainly loud speakers, and I work in the product team helping with quality testing and design.

✓ It's specialized in making audio products, mainly loudspeakers, and I work on the product team helping with quality testing and design.

原句中“work in the product team”虽然能被理解，但更地道的表达是“work on the product team”或“work in the product team”均可；此处也有拼写细节“loud speakers”应连写为“loudspeakers”。建议：注意介词搭配（work on the team / work in the team）并使用正确词形（loudspeakers）。

× Our office is designed by the overseas desire and the atmosphere is very good and it's a very cozy to work here.

✓ Our office was designed by an overseas design firm, the atmosphere is very good, and it's very cozy to work here.

原句中“desire”应为“design”（拼写错误并属于词类错误），且缺少冠词“an”和名词“firm”。此外“it's a very cozy to work here”结构错误，形容词前不该加不定冠词。建议：使用正确名词和冠词，形容词前不加不必要的冠词。

× The office was designed by by an overseas desire firm so it had modern comfortable lighting and lots of natural light which makes the space feel welcoming.

✓ The office was designed by an overseas design firm, so it has modern, comfortable lighting and lots of natural light, which make the space feel welcoming.

原句有重复“by by”，词“desire”应为“design”。时态也应与现在状况一致，用“has”而非“had”。定语并列应加逗号，关系代词引导的从句主语是“lighting and lots of natural light”（复数），谓语应为“make”。建议：检查重复词，使用正确单词和一致的时态，主谓要保持一致。

× The atmosphere is Friday and relaxing so we can work more comfortably and productive.

✓ The atmosphere is friendly and relaxing, so we can work more comfortably and productively.

原句中“Friday”显然误用，应该是“friendly”。此外“productive”是形容词，需改为副词“productively”以修饰动词“work”，或改为“more productive”修饰主语。建议：检查拼写（Friday→friendly）并注意形容词/副词的正确使用。

× Currently I'm a manager of our settlement department and in five years I plan to be promoted to director.

✓ Currently I'm the manager of our settlement department, and in five years I plan to be promoted to director.

原句中冠词使用不当，应为“the manager”（特指某部门的经理）。时态“Currently I'm”是正确的。建议：当特指某个职位时使用定冠词“the”。

× To choose this I will improve my management skill by taking landing ship course and leading more cross department project to gain strategic experience.

✓ To achieve this I will improve my management skills by taking leadership courses and leading more cross‑department projects to gain strategic experience.

原句有多个问题："To choose this" 不自然，应为“To achieve this”；"management skill" 应为复数“management skills”；"landing ship course" 是错误词组，推测想说“leadership course(s)”；"cross department project" 应为复数并加连字符“cross-department projects”。建议：使用常见搭配（achieve this, management skills, leadership courses, cross-department projects），注意复数和连字符。