工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar (verb forms and subject-verb agreement) and avoid small errors. Also make the answer slightly more specific and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep to max 3–4 sentences.

範例: I currently work as an HR officer. I enjoy the job because it allows me to meet people from different departments and improve my communication skills. For example, I regularly run orientation sessions and mediate meetings, which have helped me become more confident when speaking to groups.

建議: Use consistent tense and correct word forms (remove repeated words and use present perfect or simple past appropriately). Provide clearer linking between past and present experience and one specific example of duties or achievements.

範例: I have worked at an interior design company for almost three years. Previously, I worked for a construction company, which helped me develop practical skills in project planning and site coordination. For instance, I coordinated schedules for subcontractors, ensuring projects met deadlines.

建議: Correct vocabulary and grammar (use 'place' wording, singular/plural agreement and correct words like 'colleagues'). Be more concise and use linking words to structure the answer: state opinion, then give reasons with specific examples of support or development opportunities.

範例: Yes, it is the best place I have worked so far because my colleagues are friendly and my managers are very supportive. For example, they offer regular feedback and mentoring, and they allowed me to attend a leadership workshop to help with my professional development.

建議: Avoid fillers (uh, yeah, so) and redundant phrases. Give a direct opinion first, then one concise reason or example. Keep sentences natural and grammatically correct.

範例: Yes, I really like working there. The company culture is positive and I feel valued because my achievements are recognised and I have opportunities to take on new responsibilities.

建議: Correct vocabulary and phrasing (e.g., 'a Human Resource Management certificate' and 'get promoted to higher positions'). Be precise about goals and include a short plan or timeline. Use linking words to show purpose.

範例: I plan to focus on developing my professional skills. Currently, I am studying for a Human Resource Management certificate so that I can be promoted to a higher position and take on more responsibility within the next two years.

× I am currently working as an HR officer. I really enjoy it because it let me meet different people and develop my communication skills.

✓ I am currently working as an HR officer. I really enjoy it because it lets me meet different people and develop my communication skills.

Original error: 'let' is incorrect because the subject 'it' refers to the job and requires third person singular present 'lets' to match; this is a third person singular issue (but falls under verb + -ing/verb form correction). Use 'lets' to show habitual present action. Also 'develop' is fine after 'and' sharing the same verb form. Suggestion: use 'lets' for subject-verb agreement in simple present. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× I have worked in an interior design company for almost three years. Before that I worked for a construction company which helped me develop developed practical skill in project planning and site coordination.

✓ I have worked in an interior design company for almost three years. Before that, I worked for a construction company which helped me develop practical skills in project planning and site coordination.

Original errors: 'develop developed' contains an accidental duplication; keep the base form 'develop' after 'helped me' because 'helped' + object + bare infinitive is correct. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match 'practical' and multiple areas. Also add a comma after 'Before that' for clarity. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and use plural 'skills'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× For me my current company is best play in my career so far because my college are very friendly and helpful and also my managers are supportive and they give me a chance to grow and develop professionally.

✓ For me, my current company is the best place in my career so far because my colleagues are very friendly and helpful, and my managers are supportive and give me chances to grow and develop professionally.

Original errors: 'best play' is a typo; correct word is 'place' and it needs the definite article 'the' ('the best place'). 'college' is incorrect; correct word is 'colleagues' (people who work with you). 'are' with 'my college' caused number/word errors; 'colleagues are' is correct. 'they give me a chance' is singular and acceptable but better as plural 'give me chances' or keep singular; adjusted to 'give me chances' for clarity. Added commas and removed redundant 'also' and second 'they' for smoother sentence structure. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary 'colleagues', include articles, and punctuate for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Yeah, it says this is the best place ever I have worked. So uh yeah, I really like my job and my company now.

✓ Yeah, this is the best place I have ever worked. So, I really like my job and my company now.

Original errors: 'it says this is the best place ever I have worked' is unidiomatic and misorders adverbial phrase 'ever' and the clause. Correct word order is 'the best place I have ever worked'. Removed unnecessary 'it says' which changes meaning. Added comma after 'So'. Suggestion: place 'ever' after 'have' and use natural word order. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× To be honest, I have a clear plan to focus on developing my professional skills. I'm currently studying for Human Resources Management certificate so I can get promoters to be higher positions and take on more responsibility at my company.

✓ To be honest, I have a clear plan to focus on developing my professional skills. I'm currently studying for a Human Resources Management certificate so I can be promoted to higher positions and take on more responsibility at my company.

Original errors: missing article before 'Human Resources Management certificate' and incorrect phrase 'get promoters to be higher positions'. Use passive 'be promoted' or active 'get promoted' to indicate advancement. Also 'to higher positions' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'Human Resources Management certificate' and use 'be promoted to' or 'get promoted to' for correct modal/passive meaning and preposition use. Grammar problem type ID: 22